BSN here! This is Shimanto Youta's "Kouhai-chan Ki o Tsukete!". Enjoy! (Translated by BSN)

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Thanks a bunch!
Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1214241/11e53519e2/

Sequel (English) -> https://e-hentai.org/g/1284786/e5e7d2e112/

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So in this universe you can sell out your friends/enemies to be cumdumpsters? Huh.

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on page 23 it says yout instead of your

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I love the artist’s art, but they’ve been feeling a bit *double-facepalm* degrading towards females...? I love watching the women losing themselves in pleasure, but there is nothing left after climaxing. Shinmanto Youta’s Liru doujin had some humor in it (penis breaking a bear trap), but it has been getting stale with scenarios lately. The public cumdump world shimanto youta made is kinda shallow and lacking in variety, despite how many stories are dedicated to expanding this universe. Meh, just ranting. I don’t expect anyone to bother reading this, especially not the author. I just miss when they used to use tentacles or fantasy scenarios.

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@sauerkraut How is that the sequel if this is a Comiket 90 release, but the "sequel" you linked to is listed as C89? Are the Comikets labeled wrong for these? Were they released like Star Wars? I'm confused, and just want to read them in sequential order, haha

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no offense but there are some issues with the translation. the line about killing people in page 13 seems to be mistranslated. i read it as her saying that after becoming a cum dump she could never be a normal woman again.

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Oh, so none of this ever happened.

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Well, at least we know from the sequel that even tho she is "a little" messed up, she is living a happy life.

@theamdrag its not the sequel, its the prequel from the previous work. Basically this prequel tells us how she become the weirdo she is in the first work.

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