v1 is horrible v2 is slightly better courtesy of SpaceCamel

Glorious.

I can't wait for Ichitaka's new Jalter doujin this month.

Last edited on 18 December 2017, 20:47.

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All those sex session back to back with all those character
what a poor d̶i̶c̶k̶ wallet

RAW:https://e-hentai.org/g/1112337/0ca919dec3/

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Tittymonk and Tittynurse. I love you.

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What the hell? Why can't I rate this 6/5?!

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thanks for trying I guess?

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@ Larequirem

I feel ya, the only one you can reliably get for free is Onee-san.

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>consensual heterosexual sex

kimochi warui.

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Servants in my room?
It's more likely than you think!

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"w- wait a minute...
this isn't a treatement at all...
Sex...
This is sex isn't?"
page 11

Good to see this meme is still alive

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All that translated T H I C C feels amazing man!

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"I was thrown into a state of further arousal, compelling me to hug her and continue to rape her"
"I saw nothing but a cum dumpster in front of me and I ended up raping her a dozen times more"

Somebody really needs to learn the definition of rape. That said, thanks for the upload, these shots of Alter are definitely going to make it to my summoning collage/catalyst.

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@ kargarok1
Tell me what could've been done better. No sarcasm here; if it isn't already obvious this isn't exactly my day job.

@ Noreally
Agree, but from what I can tell it's something that keeps coming up in TRY's dialogue. Unless I have a misunderstanding of a specific phrase.

Unrelated note can someone recommend similar art style artists (translated/untranslated whatever).

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@Katka08

I've seen these solo jobs so many times so forgive me for being short. I just feel like its a waste of effort because everyone on here wants to go solo and do these things themselves but no one wants to offer their services to an actual group and their efforts could be put to good use. My recommendation for anyone is to just look for a group to join where they can learn the proper skills necessary to do this stuff. Not saying I'm awesome but I've definitely learned way more and done much better quality stuff since joining a group as opposed to my solo stuff. Everyone going solo just results in these half baked or lackluster releases that get praised to high heaven just because they say [English] in the title (no offense). (I'm not telling people who don't know Japanese at all to go to a porn group and go "hey I heard I can translate porn here"). I guess this is where I shill my own group LWB. We post a recruitment page on every release so I don't think I'd be remiss to recommend looking at them.

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Oh man, seriously, thank you, I really wanted to see this translated!

Just saw a few typos while I was reading it, you can correct it if you have the time :)

page 6 "It seems we're out of condoms... What shoud we do...?" "shoud" => "should"
page 8 first bubble: "There's nothing to feel embarrased" embarrassed*
page 8 "I conitnued to suck on [...]" continued*
page 8 second panel: "It someone doesn't [...]" "It" => "If"
page 16 "The two of use continued to [...]" "use" => "us"
page 17 "[...] she looked at my with loving eyes" "my" => "me
page 25 "I thrushed her hips [...]" thrusted? or trashed? not sure of the original meaning

Might have missed some but oh well, good translation overall ;)

Also, do you think you could translate the pages 2 & 33?

Thanks again dude, and a good day to you!

Last edited on 21 December 2017, 01:21.

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Only if you have Ultra Instinct to survive this Doujinshi 10/10 Instafav

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I hope you dont mind Katka08, but I might consider using your translation as a base to correct the things users have commented about on here.

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Good job! but, why dindn´t you use the uncensored version?

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https://e-hentai.org/g/1258308/77a4292e6c/
Perhaps it would have been better to use the decensored version here? If you intend to do the corrections SpaceCamel listed down, maybe you could try transferring?

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If you have plans for a V3, I see a few typos you might be able to fix.

Pg. 18- A pissed off Jeanne is also so cute! -> A pissed off Jeanne is also cute!
pg. 19- Alter-chan, where are you fingering that's making you feel so good? -> Alter-chan, where am I touching that's making you feel so good?

pg.20- To see jeanne not being honest to herself even thought she was feeling like that-> To see Jeanne being dishonest with herself despite her true feelings
started to wake the sadist deep within me -> started to awaken my inner sadist

minor thing: switching between cum and come on the same page, not a big deal since they both infer the same thing, but can seem odd when you finally notice both versions are being used so often in just one page.

pg.21- Jeanne eventually soon didn't even have the energy to respond -> Jeanne eventually didn't have the energy to respond.
pg.22- I'll anything you want after -> I'll do anything you want after
pg.23- Jeanne's body convulsed as her orgasms caught up to it -> Jeanne's body convulsed as her orgasms caught up to her
pg.27. Jeanne also became much more obedient -> Jeanne also became much more submissive
pg. 29. My pussy and asshole that's been developed especially for Master ->My pussy and asshole have been developed especially for Master.

This one is probably just me, but might want to go with command seal or command spell instead of just command.

Still enjoyed this work and the translation overall.

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Anal tagged incorrectly, no penetration present at all.

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@Jack735 p28. But I agree with you, one panel is not enough for the tag, it should be downvoted.

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