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[Felsala] Akatsuki!! [Ongoing]

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Posted:2018-10-04 01:00
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File Size:1.83 MiB
Length:3 pages
Favorited:427 times
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Average: 4.06
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Posted on 04 October 2018, 01:00 by:   felsala    PM
Uploader Comment
Read from left to right

English is not my first language, so if you see any error in any text please tell me how to write it correctly so I can fix it, thanks.

Pixiv: http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=15281283

Twitter: https://twitter.com/Felsala_Art
Posted on 07 October 2018, 00:13 by:   Asura_Otutsuki    PM
Score +63
Would be nice if you came up with scenarios that aren't 'wildly unbelievable'.
Posted on 07 October 2018, 00:44 by:   RabidTanker    PM
Score +67
Yeah, that organisation doesn't even have that many members and they usually work in pairs.
Posted on 07 October 2018, 03:52 by:   dman69    PM
Score +51
This guy is just rapidly becoming worse, storywise and artwise.
I mean even that comic with the Naruto and Hinata swinging had some logic to it as flawed as it was, at least up till the part where sasuke came out of nowhere and raped Hinata for no reason that was utterly disconnected to the rest.
But this? It's just stupid from the get-go, I mean really Hinata is braindead enough that she'll think asking a terrorist cult of psychopaths to stop is a good idea?
I swear its like a 14 year old's first fanfic.
Posted on 07 October 2018, 05:00 by:   theomega13    PM
Score +22
Seriously, how hard is it to make a porn story that doesn’t make ones head implode from the stupidity?

It’s not even so much about the cheating- you could easily have Hinata feel neglected and do a simple cheating story from that and not have the reader bash their head against a wall from the stupidity.

And yes, I know, it’s porn, whatever- it’s still hard to jack off to something this stupid
Posted on 07 October 2018, 08:54 by:   colpyro    PM
Score +59
Three biggest criticisms for this artist:
1. Improve story telling
2. Look up Doxy's guides to drawing porn, you need to understand structure and weight of the body.
3. Stop with all the cucky things. Yea some people draw interracial, some draw traps, some draw NTR, but when you just grab up every cucky thing, it just seems like you are a complete degenerate or an egelord.
Posted on 08 October 2018, 00:21 by:   RabidTanker    PM
Score +6
Now that I've thought about it, how hard is it to come up with an porn story?

It shouldn't be that hard to go with something different, like prostitution or an impregnation wish.
Posted on 01 November 2018, 05:04 by:   AspiesVoteMeDown    PM
Score -13
^^ Hahaha, nobody should ever take advice from Doxy.
Posted on 01 November 2018, 05:26 by:   MrMacaro51    PM
Score +12
Here we go again, let see what cringe is this.
Posted on 03 January 2019, 20:23 by:   RabidTanker    PM
Score -3
If we don't get an Six Paths of Pain reference, I'm calling this an hack.
Posted on 04 January 2019, 01:07 by:   hjerry    PM
Score -13
Saw the cover image

Was hoping for Konan on Hinata Femdom Yuri

Dissapointed
Posted on 07 January 2019, 02:37 by:   MAX3810    PM
Score -5
Friend I love the work you do with naruto hentais.
Could you make konan have a pierced nipples?
if possible, make one of kushina being a whore please.
Posted on 27 March 2019, 21:37 by:   DekomoriDesu    PM
Score +6
Even though I love this two chicks,
The Personality in this story doesn't fit shit
Posted on 04 August 2020, 10:43 by:   wtxv5871314.    PM
Score +1
小楠的肚脐眼上有几个东西这个没有

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