Started out kind of interesting, I could've seen that setting work, but then everyone was just a bitch to Sayaka. Not a fan of the complete ooc-ness, especially Sayaka doesn't seem like herself at all. Mami being pretentious (though not evil), Homura being a dick and Kyouko being pretty rough on the outside, I could see that, but Sayaka as submissive doesn't fit her character at all. Not a fan of Sayaka's altered appearance, doesn't suit her either. And the dream ending is just about never a good way to end a story. Oh well, to each his own, I suppose.