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[Shourai] A Cursed Fate [English] (Chapter One)

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Posted:2018-10-17 20:20
Parent:1301909
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:21.84 MiB
Length:141 pages
Favorited:816 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.32

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Posted on 17 October 2018, 20:20 by:   Evankstein    PM
Uploader Comment
Hello everyone, I just started to do some stuff in this program and creating stories, so let me know if you like the story, and the characters as well.

For now I don't have any website, blog or patreon. I guess I'm just doing this for practicing my story telling, camera angles and lines of action. Anyway, I'm glad you guys are liking it so far.
Posted on 17 October 2018, 01:22 by:   Sumskittles    PM
Score +17
I like it! I like it a lot!

Keep it up!
Posted on 17 October 2018, 03:31 by:   aeroprime    PM
Score +3
Looks good so far. It will be interesting where you take it.
Posted on 17 October 2018, 04:07 by:   daodos    PM
Score +5
Oh this is cool. Looking forward to seeing more.
Posted on 17 October 2018, 06:54 by:   Peeledpotato33    PM
Score +5
Loving it so far, could use some mental changes down the line :)
Posted on 17 October 2018, 07:23 by:   TheDarknessPie    PM
Score +10
The kid is going places lmao.
Posted on 17 October 2018, 10:58 by:   blargslarp    PM
Score +26
Get a proofreader and it'll be A+
Posted on 17 October 2018, 11:40 by:   Sugoichek    PM
Score +3
Do you have any blog/own site/ patreon page?
Posted on 17 October 2018, 13:43 by:   Sylvrwolflol    PM
Score +10
There isn’t any interaction between her arms and her breasts, which is odd. Every time they touch it just clips through.
Beyond that, model quality is pretty good, and the lighting is acceptable.
It’s just simple beginner’s mistakes that you’re looking at rn; learn more and practice and you’ll be golden.
Posted on 18 October 2018, 21:49 by:   MARMIST    PM
Score +6
Futa on female, gender bender or not, is my stuff, so keep it coming and I will sub to your Patreon soon as u got one.

However, man, one advice. Too many pages without sex. More sex and less story. My personal 2 cents.
Posted on 26 October 2018, 09:05 by:   dragoe3000    PM
Score +6
I hope you will make the final chapter because this good and it angry fan if you don't finish this story and goodbye from big fan!
Posted on 26 February 2019, 04:58 by:   AZ-Lefty    PM
Score +13
damn it! I didn't saw her!
Posted on 05 December 2023, 14:01 by:   Bikinisaur    PM
Score +10
I personally love the kinda comics with story in them, not just random sex.

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