Not sure what excuse I could make up for such a lazy and unfinished comic, but honestly there's nothing truly going on in my life that would provide one. My mindset right now is just lost and trying to find enjoyment in my art, Im so stuck in fear of not knowing what to draw or how to start that I let it cripple my ideas. This right here took me at least a week to do, and everyday I would procrastinate on doing these simple one page panels, ashamed that Im still so far from honing mastery of my craft. Only time will push me forward yet I lack passion to expand beyond self pity and insecurity. Is this depression, I don't know and I don't want to allow it to hold me down, So please critique every single page of this work and really tell me what I need to hear and not what I want.

1 its not lazy its nice linework and creator concepts. 2 you dont need excuses, if its commissioned that would be one thing and you would only apologize to the buyer. 3 you should never look at things like this as defeats only improvement.

that being said my criticisms are that the body proportions are slightly off (though this can also be a stylistic choice im not sure. its especially noticable in the hips on page 18 and 23) second the main focus should be on the character in most of the panels since in this form of comic you dont need every action specified, especially if that character isnt in the picture like 3 5 and 9. and finally you need to either stencil or improve on the dialogue, free forming words are very apparent and can make them hard to read.

Enjoyable parts of this were that you 1 didnt take yourself too seriously (the 4th wall break and the L&O meme), 2 your art is detailed which and finally 3 you didnt pretend this was anything it wasnt, you said it yourself that it was unfinished, so you realize that you can and have done better.

Base +6, Roachhero +4, buttfarty +4, Maxwelzal +2, rambo voller -8

Great work.
Only two things to say:
I've no idea what's going on in image 20 (just before the Wait What? image), so maybe that could be redone.
Secondly, it's missing that crucial version of image 16 where the grower is bigger than the shower, to go with the smug face of hers.
With both of those changes, especially the second one, this would be incredible.

Base +6, Maxwelzal +2, Roachhero +5, rambo voller -8