Damn, Ryohka is the M. Night Shyamalan of doujin artists.
That second plot twist was totally unexpected, good job.

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B-b-but... Nagatoro is a pure and innocent bully

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page 17
"we kissed"
im pretty sure you did a LOT more than that

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That epilogue though

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Oi, what just happened at the end!?

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Dreamception.

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0-100. Nagatoro is such an adorable bully, must protect.

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Even in saving him she teases him, this is amazing

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I love that there's more well drawn Nagatoro-san femdom themed doujins around, but this version of Nagatoro is a bit to deredere and caring for my taste, I wanted a bit more of her as the sadist bully we know and love.

Big thanks for the translation though!

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>"so much smegma"
Uh, unless I'm wrong, isn't smegma gross shit under the folds of the foreskin that come about when it isn't cleaned? Wouldn't she be talking about "precum"?

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Can we get a tag for reversal garbage already?

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The art is good and loyal to the source material but the artist took way too many liberties with the character's personality. I didn't like seeing Nagatoro start off as normal only to give a smegma blowjob and get pounce raped like the female lead in 90* of cookie cutter maledom doujin. The second short story was cute though.

Art 7. Plot 4. Sexiness 5. Translation 6. True to character 2. All out of 10.

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How can this stop right when it gets good, with a "dude did you eat garlic lmao" retardness even. What the hell.

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Magic portals deactivated - critical failure detected. My comment is bad and I feel bad.

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