Here's the first comic I've made, if you notice any mistakes I've made on this, please tell me. Any kind of suggestion or comment on how I can improve as an artist is welcome.
By the way, english isn't my first language.

twitter.com/Jahafl_art

Great work.

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Love it ! ♥

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suggestion: make it futa instead of shemale

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Great work, specially for a first comic. Any type of FoM comic/doujin who knows how to properly show the focus on the futa banging instead of flying penis and male focus is always a plus in my books (Senya Sabou could learn from you). No suggestions outside of DO MOAR. NOW

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I would love 2 see that FUTA getting screwed over by male on dickgirl!~~ >3ㅅ

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Damned good, straightforward shemale on male butt fuckin' with no frills, I like, thanks a lot for all the effort and sharing :)

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That's pretty dope. Thanks for sharing.

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Aw, I like it better when it's a "surprise".

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Perfect work, all ingredients are here to make a good comic, i would to see those two having a continuation, or maybe two futa on the boy. Again great work.

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i dont understend how she is bitting her lower lip in page 3 with her teeth closed.....or im missing something?

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So EPIC! and you should start a patreon page and i will defiantly support you if you continue making such level of futa on male comics!

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Since everything else about this is great.

I'd only say that the title is a strange.
I believe you wanted to go for "Another kind of puff-puff"

Feel free to PM me on the forums if you want some help with english stuff.

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