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Dirty Business - A Toph Story (ongoing)

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Posted:2018-11-25 22:09
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Language:English  
File Size:36.92 MiB
Length:36 pages
Favorited:255 times
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Average: 4.46
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Posted on 25 November 2018, 22:09 by:   stylestar    PM
Uploader Comment
My first new project of 2018, yet another ATLA AU story, with Toph as the main focus. Something to dust the joints off and really get back into posting again. Updates pending like all my other projects.
Posted on 14 February 2018, 06:06 by:   kenoh2889    PM
Score +86
This is really good.
my only issue is it's kinda hard to follow in some areas since its black and white.
maybe little arrows to show which way to read?
Other than that I'm loving how this has turned out so far can't wait for more
Posted on 14 February 2018, 06:36 by:   lokkkas    PM
Score +52
for future readers, the line in the middle of each picture is essentially a fold in a book. One that's read american style left right.
Posted on 14 February 2018, 07:01 by:   Tristail    PM
Score +16
Already loving it. Keep going :D
Posted on 01 June 2018, 04:26 by:   Gunkshot    PM
Score +28
holy shit. Using bending to enhance sex is such a wonderful idea.
Posted on 07 June 2018, 22:04 by:   Crociere    PM
Score +20
fuck. not even my greatest dickbending techniques is enough for this masterpiece!
Posted on 29 June 2018, 21:38 by:   newtype711    PM
Score +17
Better story-line brewing here than in most of the epilogue comics. All it needs is a big baddie and / or the spirits and this could be the best side story yet.
Plus the show already confirms that Toph had a short, sexual relation so if we push back Toph's growth spur then this could be canon. All summed up,
stuff is good.
Posted on 29 November 2018, 15:21 by:   bbobb8484    PM
Score +12
Jeez, Mr. self-insert better be careful not to cut himself on all that edge
Posted on 30 November 2018, 02:35 by:   stylestar    PM
Score +13
Can't really call Chan Lau a self-insert. Author Avatar? You could make the argument, but I'm black, so there's that. I wouldn't really call him an edgelord, either. A disillusioned Anti-social itinerant spelunker/jack of all trades with Fire National leanings and a very low opinion of Aang was what I was going for. I think I left my self-insert days far , far behind. Looking back , those were some embarrassing times.
Posted on 22 June 2019, 01:45 by:   Alurker    PM
Score +6
Not bad at all. This looks like a draft but if you were to finish it up, you might get some attention on patreon.
Posted on 28 September 2019, 14:19 by:   Sir Vicious    PM
Score +6
Love your work...
Could be easier to read but aside from that I like the story.
Posted on 28 September 2019, 18:17 by:   Pedrobeartimon    PM
Score +7
I love it, but I think the one thing that would make this *great* is if you'd back-light trace over it using clean, solid lines
Posted on 09 November 2019, 10:31 by:   negavamas    PM
Score +9
It's really good, it just needs a little bit of cleaning.
Posted on 27 April 2023, 16:34 by:   xxX420Xxx    PM
Score +6
Coming back to this years later I still have to say the bending sex scene is inspired.
I wish other artists were as bold and creative with the use of in universe abilities to enhance sex scenes.
Its not unheard of of course but very few ever go as far as this.

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