retranslation of Love Dashi 13

Base +70, Masterdr +6

Ugh. Retranslation? From what? Anyway. Editing is pretty terrible, and translation is full of English error (no capitalization of proper names, TL can't decide on English vs Japanese (ka-chan(mom), page 3 - you seems, who could have know, page 4 - how many child has been raised by this breast... Plus, those characters are not blood related, so the reference to daughter/mum strongly suggest this is not just a crap translation/editing, this is a pure crap rewrite

@sypha: you are right, the terrible editing made me confuse the characters. Maybe it is not a rewrite, but it is still the worst editing job I've seen in years. Well, EHCOVE will release a properly edited and proofread translation of this, eventually.

Proper TL is here https://e-hentai.org/g/1671299/a5a20eb498/

Last edited on 29 June 2020, 06:08.

Base +55, Megaton +39

@Red_Piotrus - There is an older english version in the galleries that is a clear rewrite. I assume it is meant to be a retranslation in contrast to that one.
In addition... while there are definitely complaints to be had about quality, what are you talking about re: daughter/mother? Mutsumi and Natsumi are actual parent and child, and it's common for impolite types(especially in porn) to throw around "aunty" "mother" themselves as a form of mocking address. You can clearly see these references in the raw as the literal text as well, so where is your fault with this exactly?

Base +24, animefan71109 +11, Hyoros +12