Some anon shared this one in hopes of getting a more decent TL than the official machine translation gibberish from Soryuu's fantia site, so I can only hope my take on it delivers.

This is too sadistic. I hate the whole "shrink into non-existence" thing too.

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meh I seen worse.The fact she is his sis is what got me. cringe me. Nice add on for shrinking fans

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where is japanese version?

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When her brother made that "all hope is lost" face... I felt that. Don't get me wrong, this is good stuff for the Murderfag side of the GTS fetish... but I kinda was hoping for a little wholesomeness near the end. :'(

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WTMSB 画风太有辨识度了

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this is gts on another level.
I love the intenseness, and I love the feeling of living together forever in your goddess' body

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Good storie but I hate "shrink into non-existence" too ;(

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Amazing work, keep it up! Don't listen to the others who shit on this, they clearly don't have or understand the fetish.

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Yikes. Not a good look.

1/10

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I don't quite like the flaky look of the skin when it gets close up.
But if that wasn't there, I would have a higher opinion of it.

Not that I really like the "disappear inside me forever" thing...

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1. Ending made me feel sad ):
2. Great artwork!
3. OK characters
4. Big Sis is a meanie ):<

Final Score: 7/10

P.S It'll make you question why you read it in the first place.

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