It makes me sad to see such a great doujin ruined with a terrible translation.

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"Yes, excuse us, now we go!"

That was the moment where I finally understood that I had fucked up by clicking on this comic

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How is this netorare? Also, the translation ruined the story.

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...is this a joke?

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Who translated this, a lobotomite?

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what happened

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wow, all this comments were right. I thought at first it was because the translator's native language wasn't english (like in my case, that's why I always ask for proofreadings) but this is soo poorly done, the original (jpn) doesn't sound that bad lol

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@Vilnius

story of my fucking life dude.

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Translation is utterly horrible but at least the image quality is good and the typesetting is alright.

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@reignengine

She says she has a husband along with her son.

Usually there's at least a sentence or two explaining why she's cheating, but with how smoothly and light-hearted everything went, I assume the husband knows anyway.

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I don't want to seem entitled here (a poor translation is better than none, and this site is free), it seems like it wouldn't be difficult to work with someone who can improve the grammar enough to make the work more readable. I'd volunteer to help, but I don't have a line to any of the people that attempt translations like these.

Also, the art is charming and fun.

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When they call the Editor the Edition you know something has gone horribly wrong here.

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I could understand what was happening, and it is only a fansub, so no reason to be upset.

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I mean, just changing the phrasing would be pretty easy for anyone to do. The spanish translation by this same group is much better, so its pretty obvious that they just don't speako englando so well. I could provide a script based on that translation myself, but I don't have any image editing experience. If anyone else is up for it let me know and I'll post a comment with it.

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@Page 5
"I can't be helped" Well nobody was trying to help you. That bad pun aside this is ok quality for a free translation, no need to go apeshit because someone was testing new waters. Also you plebeians could try learning JPN for a change so you wouldn't have to depend on translations so much.

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@mercurial008

While proper grammar would help, the translation might need to be looked over again anyway.
I can't comment on anything else, but Ken turned into Tsurugi despite the nameplate on page 2 saying Ken. But that's just a name and largely unimportant.

Looked at the rest and it's not like there's a compelling story that needs a proper translation so just making it readable with the name fix should do.

Last edited on 16 January 2019, 21:03.

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Is it just me, or the drawings and composition seem lazy? Too bad

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Is pretty.

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lmao I read the whole thing in a consuela accent from Family guy

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