Nice dojin on it's own, but the typesetting could use a little more work. For example, it's all alinged left. It'd look a lot better if it was centerd just how it would be in the original or English translated version. Differnt fonts could be used for moans and screems, but for some one with just a few edits it's okay. Feel free to message me on the forums and I'm willing to give more feedback and show some things ^^

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slt merci pour cette trad hate de voir ta prochaine trad et pour savoir tu compte faire la fin de time stripper reika

Last edited on 17 January 2019, 23:46.

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Yosh
C'est Migosh ^^

@ j1vesas : salut ^^ Ben ouais, alors quoi ? la fin de Time Stripper Reika (je t'avais checké le 1 ^^) ^^ Bon, tu sais que je suis toujours dispo pour faire un check rapide de tes releases, il reste quelques fautes, hésite pas
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à toute ^^

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