Thanks to @tresidue for the raw!

Hey there!

This is my second translation, so let me know of any hiccups or problems and I'll try to take care of them. Otherwise, any criticism is welcome and I hope you enjoyed the read!

This was a request sent to me on twitter, if you want to make free requests for translated doujin, follow and DM me @Gogtaf on twitter and I'll see about doin' 'em!

Wow, Yokkora's style has really changed. I used to be able to point his art out from very little, but I didn't even notice this was him. Good stuff. If I had to give a typesetting criticism, I'd say the text is too close to the borders of the text bubbles at times.

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Yokkora making another idolmaster doujin btw is this continue of this https://e-hentai.org/g/661114/eb9137c32c/

@robypoo agree Yokkora art style change and it's different than Yokkora other Idolmaster doujin which also use Takane Shijou too.

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Translation is pretty good, dude! Looks fine as well, especially where the text is without a balloon. Excellent x-ray on p. 15 and 16 as well, thanks for sharing this!

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A few days late for Takane's birthday, but a great gift nonetheless. Great job!

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good work. typesetting is already good, but you can still improve it.
try to manually adjust text spacing, it'll make it a lot tidier.
if you use the photoshop, use the character panel. i don't know how to do it if you're using gimp tho.

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translation is pretty good, dude! Looks fine as well, especially where the text is without a balloon.

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One of the sexiest and elegant Takane Shijou pieces to date...
Yokkora's artwork has improved greatly since the earlier works and still retains all that sexiness...
Thanks for the translation/upload

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