This turned out to be a heck of a lot of work. Mostly because of all those dicks! I really like how strong and sassy Urd is in the beginning of this one. It's kind of a shame they didn't keep that up through the whole thing, but still its much needed Urd H.

RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/404134/76c0ad1e2b/

Tnx for the TL AND decensor of this classic! (Shame you had to work with the 664 x 998 crappy scan...)

To people calling this a rewrite: provide examples, otherwise who knows? You could be trolls calling it a rewrite for kicks (no offense, but this is the internet). And if you can read the script and make informed comments, perhaps you would you be interested in TLing this properly? EHCOVE would be happy to sponsor a bounty and edit this if we get a proper script. PM me for details if anyone is interested in TLing this properly for us

You can also comment on quality of this and other possible rewrites at https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=57647

To idiots voting this down: how about you provide constructive example rather than act like trolls and try to delete a post you disagree with? Seriously, mods should behave better, sigh. I am not saying this is not a rewrite, I am just asking for examples

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Hmm, the "translation" takes a little too many liberties with the text for my taste... The rewrite tag wasn't totally unwarranted IMO.

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This is Rewrite

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Even if she's getting paid, Urd really doesn't deserve to be treated like this.

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Thanks for the hard work. This one was always one of my favorite Urd scenarios.

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lmao you literally added a textbox that didn't exist to put in text that didn't exist
how can you call this a translation?
how about page 004 where "how big are your breasts again?" turns into "do you have any questions before we start fucking like animals?"

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A shit rewrite for shit classic drawing. your grammar is so poor that I don't even know if u like dicks or U like urd.
Commas exists for a reason... or are U still in elementary?

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In regards to this gallery I'm almost certain that it's a rewrite, just like others have mentioned.

There are several inconsistencies in the text, given that the whole thing is a typical Japanese Adult Video casting, with Urd being the actress. Unfortunately, I can't translate the whole thing on my own, since I can only use google translate to check some of the text, but that's not enough to offer an accurate translation for the whole thing.

For instance, at the very beginning, the producer asks Urd about her cup size, and she replies that it's a K-cup (Japanese). Also, during the gangbang, she doesn't explicitly mentions that she's afraid of getting pregnant, just that it's not good for them to do her raw. I'm somewhat on the fence as to why that's the case, but despite she repeats that it's not good to do it inside of her, she never explain what's the issue. It could very well be that she finds it humiliating, but then again, it could be that she fears that they might impregnate her. Whatever the case may be, it's left like that, and gradually they keep doing her until she enthusiastically partakes in the act.

At any rate, I feel that the translator did actually check some parts, but then went ahead and changed others, even adding lines to places where we only get Urd's "sound effects" like the moment she blows them, and that's her making some noises, rather than the guys asking her to do it.

And speaking of Urd, her name in the original text is actually "Ururin", which I initially thought it was a mistake, since "Urudo" is the proper version of her name, but in the very last page, Keiichi calls her by her original name. It's kind of implied that she's using an alias throughout the whole filming, since she probably doesn't want to use her real name. In this case, I'm not even sure what's the best approach, since a faithful translation could lead some readers into thinking that it's the translator's fault, rather than something intentionally done.

As it is, this is a decent attempt to translate this doujinshi, and the decensoring is definitely appreciated, but it's more of a rewrite than an accurate translation.

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