I'm back with my next 3D TF Comic. This one will focus more on bimbofication than my last comic.

Please check out my other work at https://www.deviantart.com/blargblarg1012

She was better before. Now she's boring.

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@blargblarg1012

For critiques, maybe a bit too much on the exaggerated lips, and the lisp doesn't do a lot for me. In comparison, your Connie and Cummiko renders on DeviantArt are in the sweet spot. I prefer your previous sequence due to the sexualization transformation being milder and the focus on identity change. I know exaggerated features are a key part of bimbofication, but at the same time, I like bimbos that look somewhat believable (it otherwise breaks the immersion). This is why I like Tecknophyle's and cluedog's sequences. Then again, this is a matter of taste, and the renders (lighting, textures, etc.) looks good objectively speaking.

But please DO NOT go the route of IQ loss, VERY extreme and grotesque features, characters loosing the ability to speak properly, or life destruction/degradation (verse career altering). It is disgusting and fucking sadistic (even for e-hentai), and Abimboleb had already made enough of them. There's a difference between a timid girl being transformed into a successful and sexy rapper (which is what you previously did) versus Abimboleb's successful business woman being reduced to a mentally-disabled high school dropout.

Please continue on with the identity/reality change theme of the first comic. It's a fetish that has been neglected, and the stuff that does exists is mostly TG (which is not my thing with due respect). For possible inspiration, Tang (link: https://mcstories.com/Authors/Tang.html) wrote a decent number of them on mcstories.com. Tang deals with race change by making the end product a fleshed-out person and not a 2D stereotype.

Edit: clarification

Last edited on 10 February 2019, 06:54.

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@greatlakes100
I agree on the first point, but i think you're moralizing too much with the life degradation/reduction to the fuckdoll element. Dude, it's fictional character, you can't be fucking serious with being butthurt about fictional character losing it's power and influence. I understand if it's just turnoff for you (for example, i hate TG too so i can relate) but for me degrading and objectifying women are things that are crucial part of bimbofication, and for me most appealing things in it. If it doesn't reduce woman to cock-hungry slut it isn't bimbofication for me. In the end i think i kinda understand your point's but i can't help myself to compare you to those guys bitching about Shindol's Henshin.

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"I'm not like those other boys" -every comment section for a bimbofication piece ever

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@MCGUWNO

For me, it's not the matter of a higher moral ground (though I might had miscommunicated that), but whether or not I could fap to this stuff. Often, the artists don't really know where to stop and the end result looks off-putting and very 'outer-space alien.' It's a huge turn-off, and I'm sick of it. If the degrading goes too far, it ends up sounding as if the artist has some sort of issues/stupid revenge fetish to the point that the only people who could enjoy it is Eliot Rodger (a.k.a. Abimboleb). I like Krash's work, and he focuses heavily on degradation but he doesn't going down the IQ loss hellhole.

I'm fine with the right amount of degrading (if you could call it that) but not to the point where the woman has the IQ of a child or is now living in poverty.

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@greatlakes100

All women are queens, even those fictional, innit? ;D
Just kidding of course, as i said i agree you with on exaggerated looks. At the end of the day everyone has their turn-ons and turn-offs and we should respect that and let authors do what they want to do, if my favorite bimbofication artist did TG i'll be fine with that though i personally hate that fetish. Everyone does what they want to do, what they feel good at and if you want this kind of thing really bad you should probably commission it or something.

Completely changing the subject: Dude, i think your obsession with incels is a little unhealthy. Don't get me wrong, i too think they are full of shit as most groups that take their ideology to extremum but in my book they take honorable place on par with betaorbiting white knights, for me they are two breeds of the same species. I'm not saying you are one, and i don't think Abimboleb is one too (we don't have that in eastern europe xD). It's just a guy's fetish, some people fap to weird shit like turning girls into robots or some shit and nobody says that's hate fetish and they despise humanity.

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@greatlakes100

Thank you very much for your critique. I appreciate all the thought you put into it and don't worry, I read your warning loud and clear. Based off of a reasonable percentage of people's reaction to "A Guiding Hand" I've noticed two things:

The first is my decision to include a more centralized villainous character (Mr. Wright) versus a mysterious corporation (NB Records) has made the transformation seem much more malicious in its intent. What I set up as a personality modifying device that worked too well when the subject was paired with the personality of a bitchy high school bimbo, ended up turning much darker when Mr. Wright realized his miscalculation but chose to embrace and see how far he could push the experiment.

I certainly think artists like Abimboleb take it way too far and his stuff in particular carries such blatant misogynistic views towards women that it hurts the genre of bimbofication as a whole. In "A Guiding Hand," I never tried to depict an IQ drop (devastating or otherwise) but instead focused on a substantial personality and vernacular shift, I showed that the only reason Karen was talking with such a heavy lisp on that one page was because she wasn't used to her new lips, and I did not intend for both Kerri and Sammi's new bimbo lives to be read as some sort of self-inserting, revenge-seeking and sadistic life destruction. I view bimbos as the ultimate expression of feminine sexuality and something to be celebrated for their carefree embrace of a life bathed in pleasure, not as a cruel curse to be doled out on an unsuspecting victim.

Looking back at all of this, I think I screwed up when I added Karen's mom to the story. By suddenly placing a familial angle to the whole thing, it ended up as a much darker story than I intended, especially with scenes like Samantha pleading for Mr. Wright to turn her daughter back to normal. In the future I will not make the same mistake.

The second thing I noticed was that people found I went a little too far in my proportions this time around. I find the usage of plastic surgery as a plot device particularly sexy and as a result might have passed the line between what I find as alluring fakeness and what others would consider grotesque. The furthest I like to go is around where Moanique ended up at the end of "A New Sound" and I set that as a guideline. Most of the proportions ended up around there but I don't know, maybe it felt like too much when the TF is associated with something real like plastic surgery rather than an unexplained magic or technology. Either way I will make sure to keep my proportions in check moving forward.

Anyways thanks again for the critique greatlakes100! I love your enthusiasm and you should always feel like you can share your thoughts on an artists work. While not every artist will appreciate it, it's essential to the creative process for our work to be put under the microscope of different perspectives so the creator can make note and consider it as we try to improve with each new piece.

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