Translator here, I have also translated Ijiri Jouzu no Nagatoro-san, and I'm looking foward to keep translating every future Nagatoro doujinshi.

Any constructive criticism towards me or the typesetter would be very appreciated!

Personally I wish artists would focus more on her sadistic side, but this kind of cute doujinshi aren't bad either.

Very nice job. I like the translating and editing, it's done very well. One minor thing, the girls call her Hayacchi, but the character tag is Hayase on e-hentai. Either way, this is good, she rescues the boy from getting sexually assaulted and then gets his boner for her own pleasure. Good artwork, and pretty hot. Thanks for sharing!

Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/1356366/b6b655f7bf/

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@DJNoni Hayachi is her nickname.

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He gets hard for one person only. True love.

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Cute

Also how did I not realize this was the Re-Take guy

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the first one: https://e-hentai.org/g/1284006/ce277f5748/

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@DarrenC123 that was fucking poetry, man.

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Senpai is saving his libido for Nagatoro's creampie like a chad.
That last panel in page 17 is the most wholesome Nagatoro punchline in history.

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...but "ijirimakutte" translates to "tease me all you want" or "tease me like crazy" or the like. So, you know, only the exact opposite of the "English" title on this gallery.

EDIT: That led me to check the TL, and it's...eh. Okay, so just on the first page, almost every single speech bubble is a Google translation that completely misses the context of what's being said. So, again, this is all just page 1.

Panel 1: Hey--! Wh...What the hell's wrong with you two!?
Panel 2: Calm down, calm down. Just show us your thing for a bit! You did it with Hayacchi already, right? Hayacchi's been grinning a lot lately, so... We were just wondering how amazing Senpai's dick must be!

So...I'm gonna have to disagree with DJNoni about the translation being done well. It feels like a machine translation rather than a human who understands that Japanese is a context-based language and gets that context from the images and the original source material.

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I shall generate the magic portals..... Perhaps in our next lives we will have a dark skin childhood fren that bullies us until we marry her...

Part 1 - https://e-hentai.org/g/1284006/ce277f5748/
Part 2 - (you are here)
Part 3 - https://e-hentai.org/g/1700635/371b732f23/

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