Not exactly my taste... and the.... well.... impossible ways their body parts are somehow magically able to move.... is kinda urksome.... But hey, the person did art! And art that's better than anything I've made, so not like I can really complain lol. Good Job :D

Base +6, justlookingforporn +6

I would say stick to art... Leave the story writing to someone else. :P

Base +6, smileyrat +6

I would say the art is not great either. I mean, for 6 images there's only 1 attempt to draw a whole somewhat visible body, and it's... uh... page 6.

Base +6

While there could be a touch-up on that artwork (making it seem more focused as in showing the dragon walking around the fox/wolf rather than having so many forced close-ups) and making the story a bit more in-depth (giving a more internal understanding of what is happening to the fox/wolf) I enjoy this story quite a bit. I can be a bit more detailed as it is lovely, and I would love to see a follow-up of programming the female.

Base +1

Dracoso
The problem with story's like this is that the story is mostly dead as is the mind of the one who has had it broken/wiped/reprogrammed/controlled and you only have one other character to work with, unless the author brings in another character, allows the controller to lose some or all control over the creation or... That is it. :/

You have no story, maybe you can get by for a bit on things to do with the new toy for self gratification, but overall there is no story, plot or significant development.

Base +6, hive12 +6

While the story is lacking I want to be controlled like that reduced to little more than a fuck toy struggling to resist but losing slowly as my breast are teased maybe not even realizing what's happening to me.

Base +4