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[TGFan4] Life Warp Opportunity (Ongoing)

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Posted:2019-02-28 10:58
Parent:1328213
Visible:No (Replaced)
Language:English  
File Size:390.6 MiB
Length:186 pages
Favorited:452 times
Rating:
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Average: 3.75

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Posted on 28 February 2019, 10:58 by:   FasterFaster    PM
Uploader Comment
Do you like my work? If you want to discuss with us every new comic page, you're welcome to watch me on DeviantArt: https://www.deviantart.com/tgfan4
You'll find 5 other comics I've made, together with 4 long text stories.

I know that the community of ehentai is not so much into "body swap", "m2f and f2m transformations" stuff, but I need a website to post the uncensored version of this comic, and I hope you'll like it!

I definitely want to complete "Life Warp Opportunity": I've realized these 161 pages in the last month, but it's taking too much time, so I'll have to pause this: if you want, check my DeviantArt profile to see the new pages as soon as I publish them (I'll update it here too, but not page by page). (UPDATE: now we're at page 186).

I hope you'll consider to leave me a good rating: I know there are some mistakes, but consider that English is not my primary language, and every single page needs something around 1 hour of work (crazy, right? Maybe that's because I don't have a powerful PC).
Every bad rating breaks my heart, after so much work and effort, especially if you don't tell me how you think I could get better! I know this may not be your "kink", but a bad rating, to me, means that you think this is low quality work! :'(

I've spent more than 100$ to buy some of the stuff I'm using for this comic: I'm sorry if I couldn't use an actual penis, but it would have cost me 100 more dollars to do so, and I just can't afford that: I hope I've done a good work anyway! ^^ (UPDATE: sadly, now I'm way beyond those 100$...more close to add another 0. At least we have an actual penis now, together with a lot of new other stuff :D).

Every feedback is welcome, and I value them all, so let me know what you think in the comment session! :D
Posted on 12 December 2018, 18:40 by:   Salmacius    PM
Score +18
yes - Good story nice immagin
Posted on 12 December 2018, 20:05 by:   Sieght    PM
Score +83
Nice Story, I'm glad that more author release their stories on this website.

And for the downvotes/bad ratings, like I said to a lot of people that publish work here, don't worry about this. Look at the "Favorites" number instead, look at the number of visits instead.
For exemple, the french versions of my works are always downvoted a lot, however, the english translations are less downvote (english is not my native language at all and it's the same content between the two languages)

Just keep going and create what you want.
Your work is really good ^o^
Posted on 12 December 2018, 22:19 by:   KamikazeShooter    PM
Score +6
This was interesting, can't wait for more to come!!!

Thanks @FasterFaster
Posted on 12 December 2018, 23:48 by:   lilmagi    PM
Score +25
Terrible font choice. Should have chosen something more readable. Anything from this guide's normal text section would do http://prettyanonymo.us/index.php/scanlation-resources
Posted on 13 December 2018, 23:51 by:   Katsura Masakazu    PM
Score +13
I don't see any tomboys.
Posted on 14 December 2018, 22:48 by:   mrfatblue    PM
Score +6
I really love the enthesis on the height change and size comparisons.
Posted on 15 December 2018, 01:32 by:   Hevn    PM
Score +7
Your story is fine I appreciate it, but if I can allow myself to give you the flaws I found:
1: the texts, you should put bubbles it's easier and we understand the dialogues better.

2: If English is not your original language published in the language it is not a problem.

3: Avoid saying everything you bought or made for the comic book, people want to read a work ^^

4: publish when you can and especially don't put pressure on yourself and accept criticism, it will help you a lot for the future.

Good luck;)
Posted on 18 December 2018, 21:57 by:   FasterFaster    PM
Score +6
@Sieght Thank you very much, I've read your work too and it's great, keep up! :D

@KamikazeShooter Thank you a lot! :D I'm pretty busy these days, but I'm planning to continue this story ^^

@lilmagi Thanks for your feedback. Those are comics fonts, I don't want to use word baloons! What device are you using to read? On a PC it looks fine to me!

@Katsura Masakazu I guess Iris is kinda a tomboy, but I don't know why the tag is still up! ^^

@mrfatblue I like that kind of stories too, thank you!! :D

@Hevn I don't like bubbles, I want the render to be seen, and since they have a rounded shape, there's no way I could put so many words in them. I don't want to publish work in my original language, nobody would read it, and I like to improve in English with feedbacks. I like to be honest with people, I don't understand why that's a problem! I work a lot when I have an inspiration, sadly I do something else for a living. I actually like criticism a lot, it makes you get better, when it's polite, like in your case. I've read "Body Thief" and I really like it, good work :)
Posted on 13 February 2019, 13:42 by:   Gaggonite    PM
Score +5
Loving this story and where progressing.
would love to see Iris, Lancea and cara/Lance become more intense.
Iris turning Lancea more and more kinky
Iris making Lance/Caras cock bigger and bigger
Iris to make Lanea more sex driven
Iris to become the mistress to Lancea and having a 3 way relationship
Posted on 28 February 2019, 11:06 by:   FasterFaster    PM
Score +7
@Gaggonite Thank you! :D
-They're becoming more intense with this update!
-Lancea has already received many mind control sessions, so this will be enough for this story, but I'm planning a future story with more of this theme! :D
-I personally dislike huge cocks, so, sorry, that won't happen!
-On the contrary, I'm trying to describe Lancea more as a person, but we'll see where her last experiences will take her! :D
-Eheh...we'll see! ^^
Posted on 10 January 2023, 07:42 by:   m90    PM
Score +6
are you planning to ever complete this story?

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