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[Drachef] Muchimuchi Kanojo no NTR Hoshuu Jugyou | NTR – Voluptuous Girlfriend's Supplementary Lesson (ANGEL Club 2018-07) [English] [seindryu] [Digital]

[ドラチェフ] むちむち彼女のNTR補習授業 (ANGEL 倶楽部 2018年7月号) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2019-03-03 12:35
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Language:English  TR
File Size:7.68 MiB
Length:20 pages
Favorited:2105 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.50

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Posted on 03 March 2019, 12:35 by:   seindryu    PM
Uploader Comment
-As this is my first time doing this & both languages aren't my native, there must be mistakes (please kindly forgive me for that).

-Therefore any kind of suggestion and/or correction are highly welcomed for a better translation in the future.

-It would be great if there's any kind soul to create & seed the torrent, since I rarely go online.
Posted on 03 March 2019, 13:19 by:   ElectroYume    PM
Score +203
Regarding to typesetting, text placing aside, there is a lot of text in some bubbles, so you made the font really small, but you could make the font black to be more significant, the faint and greyish color is kinda blending with the monochrome and it's kinda hard to read. Atleast that's how i feel about it. Anyway, thanks for your effort.
Posted on 03 March 2019, 14:05 by:   kinoshita_tokichiro    PM
Score +122
24 hours sex marathon.
No wonder she submitted to the cock.
Posted on 03 March 2019, 16:32 by:   dunnoname    PM
Score -8
I don't care whether the translation isn't 100% accurate, i'm not here to grade an english exam but to jerk off.

So first of all, thank you for translating this piece.

Second, did you translate 1:1? I don't think that's necessary, i'm lurking here for years and different translators translating the same piece didn't match at all. All of them write with their own words. Maybe work on that and the text will fill the bubles nicely.
Posted on 03 March 2019, 16:57 by:   Naruto0116    PM
Score +76
24 hours of sex could destroy any woman's mind...
Posted on 03 March 2019, 17:40 by:   Esp007    PM
Score +21
Thanks for the translation, it may not be a perfect translation but since it is a doujin that does not have much argument it is not very noticeable, is there any editor that is encouraged to do a remastered version?
with the permission of seindryu of course.
Posted on 03 March 2019, 18:10 by:   seindryu    PM
Score +107
@ElectroYume
First of all, thanks for the suggestion. I'm using GIMP to edit & the font color I used was black, but I just can't get the desired 'blackness'. I tried to 'bold' them but as it made the overall texts smaller & harder to read (for me), I abandoned the idea. Could you kindly suggest perhaps a better app to edit image? Thanks in advance.

@dunnoname
-Thank you for the kind words too
-Yes, I did that because I have a fear of 'cutting other's message' & 'not getting the author's messages delivered'. I'll try & perhaps more practices will make it better.

@Esp007
Thank you, too.
Yes, please, by all means. That would be great if one could provide better version for better joy in reading.
Posted on 03 March 2019, 22:23 by:   ElectroYume    PM
Score +12
Well i also used to use GIMP and many ppl prefer it over photoshop, i think in your case problem lies within the font itself, try to use other one, here are some that fits nicely

https://www.webfx.com/blog/web-design/font-collection-10-excellent-free-comic-book-fonts/

Also my favourite CC Wild Words
http://fontsgeek.com/fonts/CC-Wild-Words-Roman

Also there is a really lot of text in those bubbles to jam in, i really doubt that is literal translation from raws, you could try to shorten some sentences you know.
Also its a good idea to look at other people typesettings. I know its not a good example to be giving my typesetting but here you go https://e-hentai.org/g/1285840/30a0b74de7/.
For example i used 3 different fonts, one for normal text, one for interjections, one for pleasure/sex screaming/sighs, when there is exclamation mark i made the whole sentence bold,
on the other hand when the character speaks in low voice, you can make the font smaller than rest.. By no means im telling you how you should do it, i just wanted to give you some tips and general idea of what i mean...
Last edited on 03 March 2019, 23:49.
Posted on 04 March 2019, 17:05 by:   wtfidonteven    PM
Score +54
I hate that it's NTR, but I love the art style here. Btw, I know that it's hentai logic, but if 24 hours of sex could ruin her mind, why doesn't it do anything to the asshole teacher's head?
Posted on 05 March 2019, 00:07 by:   Wasey299    PM
Score +44
Man thanks a lot for this! Appreciate the work @seindryu
Posted on 25 January 2020, 11:31 by:   Cancer_and_Me    PM
Score +6
Very nice translation. Quick question: why is the quality so poor with this version? Only 7.7 mb in all. Any way to fix that?
Posted on 30 October 2020, 05:41 by:   Fringgs    PM
Score +44
ORA! ORA! ORA!

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