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[Pochincoff] Minna no Renamon 2 (basic translation)

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Doujinshi
Posted:2019-03-13 00:33
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Language:English  TR
File Size:4.63 MiB
Length:6 pages
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Posted on 13 March 2019, 00:33 by:   j5furry    PM
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is a very basic translation, it can probably be different from the original translation

maybe if it gets too weird I leave in Japanese

if you know what it says in that text, send me a message in which one is the correct translation, I am open to suggestions

I'm Brazilian translating Japanese into English, but I'll try my best.

I'm doing this in my free time.
Posted on 11 March 2019, 23:37 by:   bangerhead    PM
Score +25
Seems ok for me as a german ;3 but you have to use another font cause these standart fonts like times new roman and stuff doesn't look good on doujinshis. Go to dafont.com and search for some anime/manga based fonts. I use that for all of my translated doujinshis too.
Posted on 12 March 2019, 00:42 by:   Haborym    PM
Score +52
As a native english speaker, it's understandable, but it sounds not so good. Like, we don't talk like this. You'd probably call this broken english.
Posted on 12 March 2019, 00:57 by:   j5furry    PM
Score +8
English is my second language, so I'm not very fluent so the text does not go so well,
Posted on 12 March 2019, 04:17 by:   Red of EHCOVE    PM
Score +72
Good start. Please visit the forums for guides on how to edit/translate better. Also it is recommended to post only finished projects here. Samples of translation/editing in progress belong in the forums in 'tell me how I can do it better' type of threads. You can also get a proofreader to help you to fix English issues. No need to do it alone

Also, if you are going to be bumping this with each translated page, you may get blocked for too many updates. We can't have the front page dominated by a few translator bumping their stuff every day...
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Posted on 12 March 2019, 14:18 by:   Rand0mPervert    PM
Score +17
The English in this needs a LOT of work.
Posted on 12 March 2019, 18:53 by:   baconmeh    PM
Score +18
Don't give up! The world can always use more translators!
Posted on 13 March 2019, 01:59 by:   The Lost Light    PM
Score +28
Coulda tried, I don't know, PMing Wayne and seeing if we're still working on it? Just a thought. Anyway, the answer is yes, yes we are.
Posted on 13 March 2019, 03:19 by:   Alagarazu    PM
Score +8
Ok, where do I get that app and who do I kill to have it?
Posted on 13 March 2019, 09:26 by:   j5furry    PM
Score +5
I was already discouraged to continue posting
Posted on 13 March 2019, 16:28 by:   FalconWarGreyLord    PM
Score +12
Given Pochin I was hoping for more robot porn but I will never say no to renamon
Posted on 13 March 2019, 17:21 by:   baconmeh    PM
Score +12
Keep going and see how your own translation holds up- Then improve based on what you think went better for TLL and Wayne. Practice makes perfect.
Posted on 14 March 2019, 01:06 by:   Jack735    PM
Score +41
If neither Japanese nor English are languages you have a firm grasp on, probably don't try to translate from one to the other.
Posted on 08 August 2019, 04:22 by:   hentailover223    PM
Score +6
not complete, update this when u translate the rest of the comic
Posted on 29 March 2022, 07:41 by:   zcjc960106    PM
Score +6

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