Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1392522/3007229fa1/

I saw that the English translation by the author was kinda killing some boners, so I took it upon myself to translate it properly. I hope you guys enjoy! Please let me know if I've made any mistakes!

Edit 1: Page 11, changed the wording of the bubble that begins with "refusal will be considered"
Edit 2: Page 12, mistranslated the bubble that begins with "your voice is"

Go see the Doctor - nice work on healing this translation. Thanks for sharing this with us!

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Please, please also fix the abomination in the Fujiwara doujin as well. Seeing it hurts my eyes.

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Those legs!

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Thank you doctor you've cured my boner illness

Jokes aside, thank you for taking your time to 'fix' this doujin

Last edited on 06 April 2019, 03:17.

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@neh1234
Which one?

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Ah, an English translation of an English translation of a doujinshi.

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I'd like one to go Pro maid please!

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As far as crack pairings go, Shirogane and Hayasaka is one I can really get behind.

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i want hayasaka + bbm

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@ZedsShadow The one by the same author, https://e-hentai.org/g/1375447/db24289bc2/

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Wiener? Wiener. Wiener!

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That moment when the doujin looks better than the original maga.

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"That was just the sound of my uterus deflating"

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maid is best girl, she's super manipulative and a compulsive liar though.

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the funny thing is the author actually want to ship this pairing

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@Agtra
By Author, do you mean the doujinshi artist or, like, the author of Kaguya-Sama?

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@josh1002
Real author, Aka. It’s mentioned in the official doujin.

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Who vetoed Nakadashi? I'm pretty sure that isn't the whipped cream gushing out of Shirogane's penis into Hayasaka's uterus in the x-ray nor copiously gushing out of her vagina afterwards.

Thanks for the retranslation/localization. Just don't get too over eager. The day when you inadvertantly trample the author's intent to fit in a pop culture reference would be a sad day indeed.

Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 8. Translation 7. True to character 6. All out of 10.

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