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Missing In Terrenbrook Forest by Armorine

Western
Posted:2019-04-16 00:43
Parent:1395537
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:38.15 MB
Length:14 pages
Favorited:96 times
Rating:
85
Average: 1.25

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Posted on 28 March 2019, 21:56 UTC by:   balou3155    PM
Score +11
Mmmm ^^ camping is dangerous in fact.
I'm really waiting for more.
Posted on 29 March 2019, 10:50 UTC by:   IronHide77777    PM
Score +6
Not a fan of vore but this story actually has some reality to it, the characters actually tried to resist and it wasn't a 100% grantee that they did not have any chance... Until the devourer "conveniently" regurgitates the one with the phone and then "accidentally" crushes the phone.

Oh wait 100% guarantee they did not have a chance, because deus ex machina....

Came close... Close enough I'm not going to down vote it for no originality as it had hints it could have been a good story.
Maybe if the devourer saw the phone and knew what it was and crushed it for that reason, I could buy that.

And would it kill to have a vore story without the distended belly's as the devourer eats only one at a time instead of stupid infinite expansion? Please?
You could have made the first character and the second character be eaten hours apart and digested with no trace and the targeted party would have still had no idea of the danger if handled right.

Edit: Page 11, an attempt to bring the story back? We will see.
Last edited on 03 April 2019, 23:20 UTC.
Posted on 08 April 2019, 23:47 UTC by:   catsithx    PM
Score +14
I hope another comes along anf eats this dragon
Posted on 11 April 2019, 20:06 UTC by:   ryproar    PM
Score -27
Wow after I saw the next page I have to say... Where is the negative star button?

I have no issue with the story...up until the dragon goes full on sadist and toys with them until they slowly die.

I really hope if he does another comic he realizes how much realism one can take before saying "pass the anti-depressants".

RIP Campers

Edit: Okay after seeing why so many hate this comic I took a step back and looked at it from another way.
The main problem so many people have with this comic is not the death part it is the PLOT ARMOR part.
Dragon eats everyone okay I get it, but every single page is, "Will they get out!?...PSYCHE! NOPE!".
It seemed as if he was not only toying with his prey but giving a middle finger to the audience that wanted them to get out.
And finally the dragon leaves everything in the same way and even slept in the camp ground AFTER they called the police. "sigh"

I like the art, but I hope his next comic doesn't have GOD status plot armor on the villain.
Last edited on 17 April 2019, 06:16 UTC.
Posted on 16 April 2019, 03:48 UTC by:   GGS    PM
Score -2
What is with the low rating? The art in good and the story is average for the genre.
Posted on 16 April 2019, 21:31 UTC by:   nuggistrike    PM
Score -2
sins ther are littlerey giant track of a huge draon and also phone exist in this univers ! well matter of time before he getting caught and kild off ! well phones ! cars ! so why not also guns ! a draon being eaten by the little guys later on will be a awsom comback revenge !
Posted on 16 April 2019, 21:53 UTC by:   Darlumina    PM
Score +2
Funny not a single one thought to give the dragon a major belly ache by clawing at his insides. Your in his gut surely if you move around enough you can cause him enough discomfort to make him think swallowing you was a bad idea.
Posted on 16 April 2019, 23:38 UTC by:   IronHide77777    PM
Score +0
Darlumina you are right.
You would think one of these campers would have a pocket knife...
I personally carry three, Swiss army, Buck and a fold out box cutter razor.
I also carry a GP-100 357 MAG but that's besides the point.

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