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like the art and character design. Personal preference: I'd like to see a bit more hetero sex in the equation (if male on genderbent male is considered hetero or not, i don't know but that'd be good too). I feel like putting the MC in that kind of situation would add a lot of complexity to his mental state after being gender swapped.

Base +6, Ponzio -6, Ouroboros186 -6, staketo -6, vomont -8

It might be a limit of your method but the MC getting fucked by a much larger thicker cock sometime would be appreciated instead of the shorter and pointed stuff.

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It is really nice to see some Lesbian Gender bender stuff it is so rare around here.

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There are some clipping issues between the models and outfits, and artifacting in the shadows (most noticeable on page 45), but beyond minor technical issues I can’t complain about art quality.

Would’ve liked some more strap-on action, perhaps a lesbian spit roast with the GB’d MC... but lactation play is nice, too. Would’ve also liked more wide-angle shots to show the whole sexy figure off.
That said, all of the fetish/content stuff is 90% individual opinion and 10% audience expectations, so it’s usually better to follow your own tastes and build an audience that’s like-minded.

As far as story goes with the other major episodes, it seems like it’s kinda being written by the seat of your pants. It pays to outline where you’re going before you start writing, and I’d argue it’s damn near necessary for anything longer than a short story or one-off if you want to guarantee that the plot stays coherent.
If you want to improve the writing, take time to figure out where you want to end, then run backwards from there to figure out how exactly you’re going to get there. It doesn’t need to be fully fleshed out that far in advance, just solid enough that you have a roadmap to follow as you write the rest of the story.

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I like this and your previous works very much. Gender bender + futa on female works amazing for me. Great series and episode.

Thanky for your work and gl.

Base +1, EagleHolden +6, Ouroboros186 +6

Very good, I love how the story goes, but I prefer women like the Futa from the previous chapter before the Dildos or the penises of light xD

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Your stuff recently has gotten REALLY good. Enjoying the huge milky boobs. I like how you keep it on the nice passionate sex without getting into any weird fetishes. Titfuck would be excellent to see. Hope to see milky ministry return too!

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I would like more action (with real cocks like in Chapter 3 that was my favorite) and not so much breastfeeding, but the story is fine and the characters are great.

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