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[Ginhaha] Error Of Call: System Call (Sword Art Online) [English]

[ぎんハハ] Error Of Call: System Call (ソードアート・オンライン) [英語]

Doujinshi
Posted:2019-05-11 01:37
Parent:1412847
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:57.89 MiB
Length:18 pages
Favorited:1441 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.49

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Posted on 11 May 2019, 01:37 by:   alex933rus    PM
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Add cover :D
Posted on 11 May 2019, 01:34 by:   pork:zero    PM
Score +75
Where's the cover?
Posted on 11 May 2019, 03:06 by:   Sofa King    PM
Score +297
Poor grammar

Pg.3: "Get me fuck out of here..." --> "Get me the fuck out of here" (though something tells me this whole thing was liberally translated anyways)
Pg.4: "Put your hands off me" --> "Get your hands off me"
Pg.4: "How dare you son of bitches" --> "How dare you sons of bitches
Pg.5: "basterds" --> "bastards"
Pg.9: "loosing" --> "losing"
Pg.12: "let this over" ---> either "let it end" or "get it over with"
Pg.12: "my anal" --> "my anus" (also probably "that can't be inside" --> "you can't put that in there" or something similar.)
Pg.15: "Wut" --> "What"
Pg.15: "That dick can't come inside! That can't!" --> either "That dick won't fit inside me! It won't fit!" or "You can't put that dick inside me! You can't!"
Pg.16: "My womb will ruptured" --> "my womb will break"
Pg.17: "The love being dominated" --> ...I don't even know what you're trying to say here tbh. "I love being dominated"? "The love of being dominated"?

Wouldn't be surprised if some of the sfx were mistranslated at this point.

Edit: @Mitsukai123 Well its tagged as "translated" so if this is the author's official english release then the gallery should probably lose that tag.
Last edited on 11 May 2019, 09:59.
Posted on 11 May 2019, 03:06 by:   Hakrei    PM
Score +63
The sacred knight ritual that happened off-screen... "Love" is serious stuff...
One of the few times in life that I've felt sexual attraction toward a character called the administrator...
Thanks for sharing
Posted on 11 May 2019, 03:34 by:   GuroLover12    PM
Score +117
My womb will ruptured
Posted on 11 May 2019, 04:54 by:   Orion9137    PM
Score +51
Hentai_Doctor! Help us unworthy ones yet again!
Posted on 11 May 2019, 05:09 by:   Mitsukai123    PM
Score +277
@Sofa King
This artist is known for releasing versions of their own work officially in English; I don't think this has been actually translated by anyone yet.
Posted on 11 May 2019, 05:50 by:   不去影    PM
Score +2
不得不说,大祭司身材真棒,prpr
Posted on 11 May 2019, 06:24 by:   aerozext    PM
Score +40
i think this is called maintenance
Posted on 11 May 2019, 09:51 by:   dap00    PM
Score +33
Annnd this is why I had trouble believing that he was that good an actor.
I bet that creampie is real enough, though.
Posted on 11 May 2019, 20:23 by:   cabman11    PM
Score +12
Looks like the programmers were having some fun.
Posted on 11 May 2019, 23:11 by:   AIDSFART2011    PM
Score +12
Does this mean Eugeo fucks so good that her english becomes gibberish?
Posted on 12 May 2019, 04:44 by:   Red of EHCOVE    PM
Score +81
Nobody linked the source for this, nor for the RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/1412875/2b85fd6c26/
So it's hard to be sure this is official. Possible, consistent with crappy English for most official releases by the Japanese artists themselves, though. A bit of a shame, this deserves better. It's sad how they can't even consider asking an English-speaking friend or fan for proofreading, sigh.

Anyway, can someone post the links to the source(s) for this? Heck, maybe someone wants to support the artist and buy this?
Posted on 12 May 2019, 07:24 by:   bitcomet    PM
Score +15
So it's all just dream or did she really get gangbang by those multiple guys or it just Eugeo?
Posted on 12 May 2019, 11:56 by:   haseo0408    PM
Score -21
Don´t feel sorry for her.
Posted on 12 May 2019, 16:44 by:   omfgmule    PM
Score +12
The art is great wish more of ginhaha/hirari's premium works were posted. Shame about the translation
Posted on 15 May 2019, 02:24 by:   FarkyMac    PM
Score +7
"Y'all"?
Posted on 12 June 2019, 22:34 by:   linck7up    PM
Score -9
"my anal" lol
Posted on 29 September 2019, 02:56 by:   Red of EHCOVE    PM
Score +42
better English translation here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1492126/6537b42328/ [Kyuukei]
Posted on 03 September 2020, 23:59 by:   Jenkitsune    PM
Score -7
Art 8. Plot 7. Sexiness 7. Translation 3. True to character 7. All out of 10.
Posted on 28 November 2021, 03:13 by:   kiwino    PM
Score +12
" asking an English-speaking fan"
That english ver will somehow end in internet first before uploaded by porky and none will be wiser. considering freeloader already reading from ""professional translator"" and people who support the artist already do so via Japanese one, improving it aren't worth it.
Posted on 16 January 2022, 11:28 by:   Agent Bun    PM
Score +16
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ308277.html
https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_191181

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