Hey guys, this is my first time doing this kind of thing so any kind of feedback is appreciated !

Now that I've mostly gone through much of the process of cleaning, translating, typesetting... I have a newfound respect for other people that graciously do this.

Well anyway, even though I'm not a fan of Love Live, I've decided to translate this doujin mostly because I like the art and also because I've been learning japanese for quite some time now and wanted to give it a go. Feel free to point out any errors I've made and drop some tips if you have some.

I may try my hand on the sequel if this one is well received.
I hope you'll enjoy reading it !

Raw used : https://e-hentai.org/g/1293477/8449efddd8/

You did well!!! The English is good, reads easy and no mistakes. Maybe you could have added a dash in all-boy school, but that's a matter of taste more than grammar. I love this story by the way. She immediately takes charge, and seduces the boy that she wants. Girl Power!

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thanks for the chapter ,clean ok fonts ok redraws ok , really good editor

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thank you!!!

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You made it! I'd say I realized some improper points in my Chinese translation by looking through your work. Thanks for sharing.

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Great work and I hope you'll translate the sequel as well.

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Great job on the translation and thanks for sharing it
I think you are gonna do a good job with the sequel translation if you put the same effort as this one

Also in page 6 i think you meant otonokizaka instead of kisaka

Last edited on 11 May 2019, 19:34.

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Thank you for the kind words guys !
I'll try my best for the sequel !

@DJNoni Thank you very much ! I forgot to mention that I also really like how playful, she becomes particularly sweet in the sequel too !

@LongLancer Maybe I'm the one who made the error, I'm still pretty new to translating japanese.

@jeandiegoconi You're totally right, I swear I had checked on the love live wikia for academy names. My bad !

Edit : Sequel done : https://e-hentai.org/g/1415625/b3116e27be/

Last edited on 18 May 2019, 03:56.

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Holy shit that mf is ripped wtf?

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