Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1377582/6f51961db5/

Translated by myself
I'm sorry for bad editing, bad grammar and/or typeset
This is my first time translating doujinshi

Hope you like it

I can't say anything about the quality/accuracy of your translation, but I can give you some feedback on your edting.
You avoided the popular mistake of using e-hentai's downscaled 1280px res images for editing. Good job on that.
Your editing can use some polishing, but I don't want to wash my eyes with sulfuric acid either to unsee it. So it's a solid first try.

If you want to improve your editing skills, I can recommend you this typesetting guide: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main. For more guides visit the "Cove of Scanlators" on the forums. For fonts check dafont.com they have a great variety of good and free fonts. You can also grab some of blambots free fonts at blambot.com. Or just google "free fonts" .

Base +13, huedoge +19, bigscuba +2, Megaton +42, n00ps +6, Porokichin66 +9, Darksword696 +13

Thank you for TL! Much appreciated, looks better than other first-timers I've seen here.

Base +6, Fear_kun -6

So anyone else gonna comment on the producer cheating on his wife?

Base +6, bigscuba +2, DreadPool +6, mellowjello +8

@Ancient-Alien thanks for your feedback, and thanks for the guide

Base +6, huedoge +19, bigscuba +2, Megaton +42

While I am grateful for the quality of the images themselves, I really do recommend finding a proofreader for grammatical errors. If you want I've got free time inbetween waiting for my circle to upload our rough draft for our next upload so I would be willing to even do a look-over for you if you want to PM me a file with the script to correct via the forums.

Base +7, niceisdio +6, Darksword696 +13, jsnormandy +10

@Fate Averruncus I'll try sending it to you when I have time

Base +6

is there any prologue or previous chap of this book ?

Base +7

@Katsuragi_Hinagiku

this might be the "after story" of Boku no Kanojo o Shoukai Shimasu series by the same artist. you can just search them.

Base +6, jsnormandy -10