Disgracing Duty is the story of Richard Hatten, an FSS special agent who has the duty to (SPOILER alert) capture the famous druglord Learco Hearnandes: in order to do so, he'll have to take a disappeared hooker's appearance, and to undergo intensive training.

This is the story I'm currently working on. I publish its pages in advance on my Patreon (https://www.patreon.com/LenioTG).
If you want to discuss Disgracing Duty with us day by day, you're welcome on our DeviantArt community:
https://www.deviantart.com/leniotg
Maybe you had heard of me as "TGFan4", but I've just changed my username!

I hope you'll enjoy this story: good read!! :D

Text, text everywhere.

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Thanks for posting, I really enjoyed this one so far.

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@Mistake I'm very glad to read your comment!!! :D

@sunshineandlolipops Yes, I like to develop a story! If you don't like that in a comic, I'm sure you'll find thousands of other comics to your liking.
In any case, every feedback is useful: I'll happily make more pages for each dialogue, but each one of these pages needs hours to be made with my current hardware ^^

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I like your stories but the problem is the text... it's too big, too big so it breaks the staging. I feel more like reading a novel than a comic book.

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I remember you're the person that first got me into Student Transfer so thanks for that.

As for your writing I agree with the others, it might be better suited for a novella format with the images being supplemental perhaps.

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@Hevn and @ensane Thank you for liking my work :D
I'm sorry that you don't like this much text, but at least it's a big relief to know that these low votes are for this! Because I've put really a lot of efforts realizing each single page. Don't worry, when I'll get a more powerful PC, also thanks to the support of my patrons, I'll make sure to realize more renders per each scene, in order to not give you this sensation!
I actually make 2 kinds of stories: long ones, like Disgracing Duty, and casual ones, like Friendzoned for example, that has much less text. For the long stories, I need a deep plot, and in order to do that I can't avoid filling them with text, since they're around 200 pages only long! When I'll get a better hardware I'll be able to split them into 600 or something like that, and I hope your experience will improve!
Thank you for your feedback :)

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@FasterFaster I'm so glad I kept my comment laconic. I can already tell you're great at not taking feedback personally.

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@sunshineandlolipops Every feedback is useful, thanks for sharing your opinion with me! ^^
I'm working on a new comic, and this time I'll try to make a simpler story! :)

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It's an original plot, and is easy to read! nice work

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Thank you @Salmacius! :D

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