[Aya Yanagisawa] Deviants (Ongoing)

Posted on 20 May 2019, 05:56 by: Viktor0nk

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Author: "(Here it is! The start of the reboot!

How would you react to being paired up with a hot older woman you’ve never met before? Would you dive in headfirst, be a little cautious, or resist such a cruel fate?)"

Pre-Reboot Story - https://e-hentai.org/g/1402482/bfccfab641/

Posted on 06 May 2019, 05:28 by: Fenrir26

soo... is the original done or is this just a alternative telling of the story

Posted on 06 May 2019, 10:31 by: Faonir

Viktor0nk, in Romania, we have a saying: The old chicken and the young carrot make the best soup. So, to answer your question, I would probably diven in, both headsfrst.

Posted on 06 May 2019, 13:29 by: Loki The Flameshield

Wait...What's going on here? And Cheryl's 37? That sounds...not right. In fact, she looks more like her mother here.

Posted on 06 May 2019, 13:44 by: dope

The original comic lost its way and the artist got bored. So they killed it and rebooting the story.

Same cast with some edits. Different story.

Same Patrons fueling the comic

Posted on 06 May 2019, 17:30 by: sixugliness

Must say I am sad the original comic is over. Though the new art style is not to my liking I still found the story quite interesting.

Posted on 06 May 2019, 23:29 by: lex15226

Aww, i liked old Cheryl better.

Posted on 07 May 2019, 07:19 by: WhistleTillTheEnd

Maybe X-TC will get the devotion she deserves this time around

Posted on 07 May 2019, 08:50 by: erana

Artist could have at least finished the chapter before rebooting. Or at least finished a "don't leave it in a cliffhanger midd-fight" page before rebooting. You know, just so NOT being a dick. I understand desire to reboot if the storyline was going nowhere, but that was kind of rude towards the readers

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Posted on 09 May 2019, 12:20 by: allenwalker39

So Jameson's not an Incubus anymore? That's quite disappointing, but I'm glad Aya is back.

Posted on 13 May 2019, 06:27 by: egamer557

I am sorry but this isnt deviants for me any more

Posted on 13 May 2019, 07:28 by: miroku888

The patreons seem like cucks for paying this guy to make a comic, and then just bending over and accepting it when he suddenly wakes up one day and wants to nuke the whole thing in favor of a reboot.

Posted on 16 May 2019, 04:41 by: Bralababa

Well, to be honest, patreons probably don't care about story this much, as long as there's porn.

Posted on 20 May 2019, 06:04 by: God Revan

Guys, you have to understand that during the original run, the author lost it's love with the original storyline and thought it needed a complete refresher. There are artists, who are also authors of their own comics, start a comic in one style of drawing, stop mid-way, and continue in a different/improved art-style[eg: Morganagod/Toph Heavy Comic]. So before we start judging the story, lets at least allow for the first chapter to finish so we can properly see all of the initial changes to the story. There's definitely more that we haven't been shown yet and it would be proper for us to give some courtesy, to allow the author to show us their hand first before we can make any decisions.

Now, I personally am enjoying how meek, embarrassed, and uncomfortable Jameson is feeling right now in front of an older, more experienced woman. Remember, in the original, Jameson was afraid of commitment. Here, he actually decided to go through with things and accept Cheryl as his lover. So at least in this version, Jameson retains some of his courageous demeanor from the original run.

Posted on 20 May 2019, 08:02 by: erana

@God Revan: The authors are atists, but they are also assholes. You wanna reboot a story? Go ahead. Marvel and DC have done that so many times I lost count. You CAN do it. But if you do it in the middle o a story arc, even more, in the middle of a fight scene, whithout even a "sending off" page to give closure to the readers, THAT is being rude. Even worst, needlessly rude. The readers sometimes think they deserve more than they do, but the reverse (authors thinking the readers don't deserve anything) is also false: EVERYBODY deserves common courtesy, readers and authors alike.

And no, "the author is disilusioned with the old story" doesn't cut it - because doing a send-off page does count as starting a new tale PROPERLY (been there, done that) and even a single-panel with a wall of text would have sufficed.

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Posted on 20 May 2019, 10:00 by: God Revan

They don't have to do that because this comic is supposed to be mainly in the Deviants Website. It's just being hosted here. They have no obligation to make a page explaining everything when they left all they needed to know in the description in the comic's description and linking it to their Patreon public post. Aya & JMendura[Author] know this very well.

Posted on 20 May 2019, 21:40 by: dope

@erana The patrons approved the abrupt shutdown. Shut up and enjoy your free porn.

Posted on 20 May 2019, 23:54 by: God Revan

@Erana- If you want your input to matter, go on the SexyVerse Comics' Patreon page and contribute. If not, STFU! Both Aya & JMendura know this comic is up in E-Hentai so they obviously take input from the people that leave comments here and give extra options in the Voting Polls in Patreon. Don't be a hypocrite and think your opinion matters to the continued progression of this comic if you're not going to help them in Patreon. Their obligation, for the most part, is to the Patreons that help push this comic forward.

All we can do here is talk about the new changes and express our approval, gratitude or dislike for such things.

Posted on 27 May 2019, 13:00 by: tchubert

This would have been better off as its own, self-contained story instead of a reboot.

And @God Revan, really, you're just making things worse.

Posted on 03 June 2019, 07:04 by: dope

Fam if we dont respect the artist in any way shape or form and grow a collective hate from the free piracy site, More NSFW artists are going to hide behind patreon and become bigger hardasses.

Shit I've seen good artists quit because they come here and see the hate while their patrons suck his dick raw since their financial entitlement gets in the way of actual input.

Posted on 10 June 2019, 05:38 by: God Revan

Yoo. I'm enjoying how Jameson is acting. He's literally all of us when we've felt embarrassed when someone talked how "sexy" our moms were. LOL

Posted on 10 June 2019, 14:14 by: Forever69

I like how people are talking shit about the reboot. If you enjoyed the old version how about YOU DUMB FUCKERS GO DRAW AND COLOR IT YOURSELVES.

Posted on 11 June 2019, 01:05 by: Delta7777

You Know I’m just glad that the art style is back

Posted on 18 June 2019, 01:07 by: God Revan

In comparison with the original, I think this version of Cheryl is much better. I kinda like the "MILF" design of her plus she has those hips and bust to get hungry for.

Posted on 24 June 2019, 08:17 by: Sovann

Holy shit! This is REALLY awesome!
Can't wait for more!

Posted on 01 July 2019, 19:04 by: lex15226

They should've made this Cheryl's mother instead.

Posted on 10 July 2019, 08:23 by: God Revan

Aya actually gave Cheryl a bush and it's rather well detailed. I, myself, prefer my girls perfectly clean or shaven but this is a good change.

Pg. 13- That countdown better not be for what I think it is.

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Posted on 12 August 2019, 08:50 by: RabidTanker

The art is a bit of an step backwards, in my opinion.

Posted on 12 August 2019, 15:54 by: BKWLJDL

cheryl简直骚断题

Posted on 13 August 2019, 22:16 by: God Revan

Cheryl is definitely so much better now. She literally is so much more delicious and THICC'er than before.

Posted on 19 August 2019, 12:49 by: Omasu

Why did you reboot it? I like the first version :'( :"(

Posted on 20 August 2019, 03:21 by: harawanagangsta

Go look at the end of the other version, They switched artists to an amateur and the writing went off the rails.@Omasu

Posted on 02 September 2019, 10:58 by: router25

Jameson is lowkey a grownup Pico with a big cock

Posted on 10 September 2019, 06:39 by: Jazzdevie

I miss the fact that the main character was an incubus, but love all the new stuff in this version

Posted on 10 September 2019, 07:49 by: jmendura

Writer here, for those wondering why it got rebooted, there were a number of factors as to why it was ended in such a way and I understand why people would get mad at it. I've listed the reasons below but overall I just couldn't keep it going. It just wasn't healthy for me to continue. But I'm happy with this comic. I'm no longer spending half of my paychecks covering costs like I used to do. I no longer have that luxury so I do what I can with the help of those on Patreon and Gumroad. I can't do anymore than that no matter how badly I want to.

Why did I reboot Deviants?
1. No passion. I have been wanting to start over for a long, long time. I can change the direction of the comic but I didn't like the foundation for it. So to me the story would never be to my liking. The sense of closure you'd get from any kind of ending would be incomplete, hollow, and insincere.
2. Patreon changed what was allowed on its platform. That changed the story and forced me to remove content that they didn't approve of.
3. That happened a few years ago and the majority of support for Sexyverse came from the cut content and when that was removed, support dropped drastically. Turns out many patrons were interested in another comic that could no longer be on the platform. That was not a good realization for me.
4. The comic is reliant on financial support, with me paying for over half of the costs myself for over three years. I commission artists to put art to my script and every month I had hoped that I wouldn't be spending half of my paycheck on it. After a while I've had to cut back on content because I couldn't afford it anymore.
5. Sexyverse Games was a side project that grew incredibly fast and proved to be more popular and time consuming. After a while I started seeing continuous growth while Sexyverse Comics continued to decline.
6. That led to me getting a new artist for the comic while putting the comic's original artist to work on our games. Long before that happened Deviants was already dropped to updating once a week and any other comic was cancelled. Reminder that the comic was consistently in decline over the past few years.
7. It got to the point where I had to change back to the original artist and was faced with the perfect time to reboot the comic. Switching artists and then later rebooting the comic would have doubled the whiplash. I know people wanted a satisfying conclusion but it would not have been good.
8. I knew it would rub some people the wrong way but I wanted to start the reboot as soon as possible.

Posted on 30 September 2019, 05:26 by: God Revan

I'm liking the new Lisa design. Her look actually matches up with how demeanor and attitude were in the original one.

Posted on 19 October 2019, 09:39 by: Nintyfresh

Alright, finished reading the original and now this story makes more sense. I dunno what was wrong with the old one, but whatever.

Posted on 05 November 2019, 01:16 by: Imsolo

Not gonna lie would love to see some sexy incest with the mom and sister in here as well.

Posted on 05 November 2019, 01:56 by: 83314606

ah，that's good

Posted on 05 November 2019, 07:54 by: Hyperfapz0r

Ruined it with that self insert twink loser

Posted on 26 November 2019, 01:28 by: Snake_King

I can't help but think about what Jameson's reaction will be when he finally meets Lisa and she talks about how she had "fun" with his mom.

Posted on 09 December 2019, 08:35 by: God Revan

YOOOOOOOO! JAAAAAMIIIIIEE!!!!

Posted on 16 December 2019, 12:43 by: Hyperfapz0r

Ruined it with that male self insert character. What a loser

Posted on 16 December 2019, 20:09 by: lex15226

I'm glad the artist is back, but this story is just boring now.

Posted on 15 January 2020, 21:41 by: God Revan

These Incest-inuendos and Jameson's reactions are literally fucking hilarious. I can't stop laughing. XD

Like, fuck! Jamie FTW! She's making this chapter full of WIN!

Posted on 29 January 2020, 09:46 by: Tess Verres

Personally, I loved the old story. It was much more enjoyable imo. The new one is not interesting to me because it takes the same characters and rewrites the entire thing while changing the characters around. Characters that I grew to know from the first story. With this reboot, it's now very jarring.

Imagine this: Take The Justice League. Now, rewrite it so they're just civilians who are doing things somewhat similar. They fight crime, but as normal people except like 2 people who have powers. Their personalities are mostly intact, but it's just normal crime fighting. Sure, "Superman" is in it, but it's really some normal dude named Clark Kent who happens to be a regional power lifting multiple time champ who can knock the snot out of most people in one hit. He only has the name "Superman" because he's so strong. That's what this reboot did to me.

On the flipside, if I had never read the original I'd never be in this situation where I am now. I'd actually not be reading it at all as my filters only hit this for tomgirl (to which there's no instance of whatsoever). If I DID read this it would be an interesting read for a bit, but that would be it. Story isn't super interesting, world isn't explained, no backstory on anything.. It's a very "cum and leave" kinda story.

All in all, I think the story itself for me is spoiled by the original story and reusing the characters and rewriting them too. Excluding this, story is bland as it's literally a "fuck my son he needs help" and "meet and fuck" (not saying the original wasn't very meet and fuck, but there was a whole story in it). There's been nothing engaging on this so I'm giving it a hard pass. I'll check back in once in a while to see if it gets any better but likely not since this is the direction the writer wanted it to go from the start anyway. Nothing wrong with that, just not my thing.

Posted on 13 February 2020, 00:01 by: emperor20

I don't approve of NTR, but cockblocking your brother deserves some kind of punishment.

Posted on 01 March 2020, 08:18 by: God Revan

Holy....fucking....shit! Kennedy looking sooo much better in this new drawing style than the original!

Posted on 16 March 2020, 21:30 by: emperor20

The Amazon is also part horse.

Posted on 30 March 2020, 09:24 by: God Revan

Jamie & Kennedy as a thing? Hmmm, I could get behind it.

Posted on 06 April 2020, 18:54 by: FarkyMac

Yeah, this is...definitely boring. What was stopping Aya from picking up the old comic where it left off?

Posted on 10 April 2020, 09:56 by: Gambit275

the diversity is nice but i'd still like an ending to the first one

Posted on 12 April 2020, 20:29 by: deadlymopo

Deviants page 54

Posted on 16 April 2020, 11:22 by: yemaozi

我tm社保，，，

Posted on 22 April 2020, 13:42 by: lyght

@Tess Verres I agree with what you are saying but you really should have picked a better analogy. Comicbooks get "rewritten" all the time. That is why there are many different variations of the same characters.

Posted on 29 April 2020, 00:28 by: *lesigh*

The story in this version is, frankly, inferior. The problem isn't the writing; the problem is that, fundamentally, all ideas have a certain amount of potential. For instance, Batman is a more interesting character than Superman Why? Because there's just less you can do with Supes. His power is to have all the powers, but that's kind of the problem. He's too powerful, his lack of limitations places a cap on how engaged we can be, because, at the end of the day, we never really doubt Superman is going to win, and he's probably going to win by punching something really hard.

Batman, on the other hand, is just- a guy, he' just a guy. He's rich, and well equipped, smart and highly trained. But at the end of the day, when he fights Bane, he gets his back broken and has to go through months of intensive physical therapy. Which- is just not a story you can tell with Superman. Ironically, because Batman is less powerful than Superman, you're able to tell a wider array of stories with him. But you know how's even more interesting than Batman? Nightwing, who is who just Batman, but slightly worse.

The same concept applies to concepts for stories. So, what have we done, well, we had a story about a unique individual, an incubus in a world where incubi are supposed to be extinct, there's a mystery, our protagonist is an aberration, how did he come about? Incubi didn't just go extinct, they were hunted to extinction because they're dangerous, there's conflict, people are going to want to control, or hurt him because of what he is.

Now, the story is about a normal human whose mother is a pimp. Also a gigolo I guess.

I struggle to come up with an apt comparison. But I guess it'd be kind of like if you took Baccano! Or like, JoJo or something, and rebooted it, but the reboot is The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya. Like, I enjoy slice of life, but that would be a downgrade, no one would be happy with this, and they would be correct to be unhappy with it.

I can appreciate not wanting to continue a project, I am a novelist, it happens. I can understand abandoning a project, though I find doing so when you are releasing said project for public consumption to be questionable. What I cannot honestly comprehend is taking a project that you are publishing for public consumption, abandoning it, and spinning it off into a structurally inferior story using the same characters.

I just, don't get it.

Posted on 29 April 2020, 16:53 by: subilial

"It's thicker than my brother's!"
Roll Tide!

Posted on 11 May 2020, 14:53 by: FarkyMac

Yeah, this is just...a bunch of aimless fucking.

Posted on 11 May 2020, 21:58 by: leftrightup

@FarkyMac
>What was stopping Aya from picking up the old comic where it left off?
the fact that it's not her comic. She's paid to draw it by the hack writer, it's his comic.

Posted on 18 May 2020, 10:33 by: Sosenem

meh, the previous version was a lot better, now it just feels completely random and silly

Posted on 18 May 2020, 22:21 by: FarkyMac

Ah, so we know where to put the blame, then.

Posted on 06 July 2020, 09:42 by: velikynovgorod

a blonde, white male fucking a black women is racist, and is symbolic of the white racist colonial patriarchy.

please remove this doujin in the name of racial and social justice, thank you.

black lives matter.

Posted on 06 July 2020, 20:47 by: Nintyfresh

can we pay the hack writer to not write, and just let the artist finish the old one because it didn't suck this bad?

Posted on 07 July 2020, 21:13 by: Gambit275

a werewolf banging a vampire? OH HECK YEAH!!!

Posted on 09 July 2020, 19:53 by: allenwalker39

I'm already loving the vampire.

Posted on 13 July 2020, 16:17 by: Ryan WolF Thepram

So deviants past from a Harem to randomsex mmm I´m done the art is awesome but i dont like the new history lov to the artist tho

Posted on 21 July 2020, 01:27 by: Retconner

So I'm sitting here wondering what convinced the author to go for a more simplistic story compared to whatever happened in the original.

Also couldn't help wondering what Patreon did that caused the author to change up the original story that caused that mass exodus of his fans from his patreon. What was in the original story that was so bad that Patreon had to complain about it?

Posted on 23 July 2020, 01:18 by: velikynovgorod

a blonde, white male fucking a black women is racist, and is symbolic of the white racist colonial patriarchy.

please remove this doujin in the name of racial and social justice, thank you.

black lives matter.

Posted on 29 July 2020, 05:20 by: dope

HAHAHAHAHA White anons on a doujin site really be trying to ruin my fun reading a sista getting piped by a demon.

I'm loving how the characters have been repurposed and the art is staying the same.

Hopefully this one doesnt die.

Posted on 05 August 2020, 17:44 by: Gambit275

ok now this is getting hawt

Posted on 17 August 2020, 09:58 by: chibikami

Retconner
Patreon implemented a variety of new policies regarding funding pornographic content
notably, depicting incest is now a no-no

Posted on 17 August 2020, 15:10 by: jackie liu

oh fuck yes！！！
succubus，huge-tit vampire，hot mom，amazing！
i can have sex with cheryl jennifer natalie meradith all day

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Posted on 31 August 2020, 12:17 by: Gambit275

i wanna do the vampire and werewolf in a threesome

Posted on 01 September 2020, 04:27 by: mdr33flame

I must know what he did with his mother

Posted on 07 September 2020, 13:39 by: God Revan

I love how details their pussies are becoming. Aya has definitely stepped her game up.

Posted on 22 September 2020, 10:16 by: liclic

I have to admit that this new series is completely different from the first one. I would love to see another X-TC avyway.

Posted on 04 November 2020, 15:46 by: allenwalker39

Jack's brothel adventures deserve its own series, cause that was super hot.

Posted on 24 November 2020, 09:04 by: Nintyfresh

I fuck black women to eliminate the white race, starting with myself.

Posted on 30 November 2020, 08:23 by: anime-tiddies

Retconner how did you fall for such an obvious troll

Posted on 30 November 2020, 23:06 by: Forever69

Really loving this series even after the reboot long ago. Kinda prefer this now how reading it over again from the beginning...5 times :P

Posted on 08 December 2020, 03:54 by: dposer

I keep hoping the comic gets better and every time I check it I'm again disappointed

Posted on 08 December 2020, 07:38 by: Nintyfresh

I love the artist, I just wish he/she/they would write something they liked instead of some boring oc crap someone else commissioned who can't write for shit.

Posted on 15 December 2020, 11:13 by: Hardlizard

I find the boy vampire way more interesting than Jaime. He has more personality, he's more complex instead of just being a piece of meat passed around.

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Posted on 21 December 2020, 11:48 by: Subnero

Nice, interesting

Posted on 26 December 2020, 17:09 by: Junior Ranks

I absolutely love this, but I will be absolutely crushed if Jamie and Meredith don't have sex before this ends.

Posted on 04 January 2021, 20:06 by: Evil Tree

While I would have liked to have seen an ending for the old comic I support and respect the decision of the writer to start anew. Continuing a project you no longer have love for is not good.
Plus I like the changes made here, tweaking the characters to be more likeable, more variety of Deviant species and a lighter tone that fits better with the premise of a world of sexy crazy monster people.
I'm hoping for versions of XTC and Melinda, maybe Melinda still works with the Enforcers and clashes with Meredith on the Benefactors in arguments that inevitably descend into sex.

Posted on 26 January 2021, 23:02 by: Imsolo

It's practically setting up that at some point Jamie and his mom are going to fuck. Great if you ask me!

Posted on 08 February 2021, 12:50 by: God Revan

@Imsolo & Junior Ranks- Unfortunately that's impossible. This project is being funded by Patreon and if they found out that there's "Incest" in this comic, they'll shut Sexyverse down because it's against their TOS. There's plenty of kinks that the author can't do whatsoever because of the limitations put on him and mostly every Erotic Creator on Patreon.

Posted on 03 March 2021, 21:21 by: Dysonthiox

Are there places that Aya could use to fund his/her/their stuff that don't have these restrictions on pornographic content?

Posted on 09 March 2021, 23:54 by: Imsolo

@Dysonthiox

SubsrcibeStar. No censorship of works there to the best of my knowing.

Posted on 10 March 2021, 01:53 by: Fenrir26

hmm not gonna lie miss her mother having the long black hair, but thx for the update.

Posted on 09 April 2021, 11:25 by: Sage Windu

@velikynovgorod: Uh... what?

Posted on 12 April 2021, 22:33 by: Oracle 911

Page 112 LOL, made my day...

Posted on 13 April 2021, 10:37 by: leftrightup

@Gabby Goat
@Sage Windu
Are your shitpost detectors broken?

Posted on 19 April 2021, 22:12 by: Gabby Goat

'Atta boy, Jameson! Turn the tables on that mega milf!!!

Posted on 11 May 2021, 10:42 by: rencen

Page 11- First orgasm??? It's no wonder why she is so grumpy!

Posted on 16 May 2021, 01:28 by: Gabby Goat

@leftrightup I don't know where you've been living for the past 5 years, but there's no line between shitposting and schizophrenic sincerity anymore. It all sounds the same.

I wonder how long it'll take before Kennedy lifts up her scrotum to reveal a pussy underneath and then jump Jameson's bone?

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Posted on 03 June 2021, 23:28 by: 假如你是李华

就连本子也要zzzq了吗？

Posted on 16 June 2021, 00:39 by: Gabby Goat

Oh? I see a peculiar fold peeking out from underneath Kennedy's sack~

Posted on 06 August 2021, 03:45 by: Orochimaru666

so other words you just got apatheic and lazy? becuas they still allow incest on patreon

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no offence but at least the other story had more style and creativity, its a good idea to go back to the original and better comic

Posted on 11 August 2021, 14:56 by: Raindropz

I liked it better when Lisa was James’s childhood sweetheart and then got together with him. I honestly just prefer Lisa over Cheryl.

Posted on 11 August 2021, 15:21 by: Gaggonite

loving this, very awesome

Posted on 15 August 2021, 16:57 by: DogStreet

Page #131

Skipper: Kowalski anallize...
Kowalski: Skipper, I detect an annomaly.
Skipper: I wonder where this will take us... dear Author...

Posted on 28 August 2021, 06:36 by: Gabby Goat

A nude beach!? He'll be eaten alive!!!

Posted on 28 August 2021, 19:19 by: Lolzu

All right. It's time for me to finally to give my opinion. This will be a long one, so ignore if ya like.

First, I'd like to point out that I've read the first version of Deviant since it came out. I will try to minimize the comparison. However, it will be inevitable as this is a reboot. Therefore, I will criticize the writing quality from the transition of a over arching plot to a simple slice of life story. Let's begin.

First, the characterization is not fleshed out enough. For example, all I know about James is that he can cook, has a big dick and can fuck for hours with multiple partners on the same day, despite being human. While I understand I have to suspend my disbelief in a setting full of monstergirls, the author is asking too much, as the first story James was an Incubus and it was believable for him to have sex without rest. While I consider James characterization to be fine in the first story, here he's okay at best and he's the best character so far, which is not a good sign. As for the rest of the cast, calling them two dimensional would be generous as they only have one character trait and then immediately start fucking. They barely sit down and have a conversation. And even when they do, it's always about sex.

"But Lolzu! Did you expect there to be a story, proper character development and interaction in porn?"

Well...yes. If the writer can pull of a decent story for the first iteration, then I expected for them to do it here. Especially in a simpler story. This could've given them more leeway to further explore the characters and world building in a normal setting. Which other works have already done and better.

"Imagine actually ranting about a porn not having a good story. Lol"

To point out comments similar to this. This isn't a ten page doujin where it's expected for characters to meet and fuck on the fly. This is an ongoing series which is in the triple digits of pages. That's a considerable amount to ask of someone for a shallow story. The first one may not be the best thing in the world, but there were events happening outside of sex. Fuck there were even fights.

This one, James just meets a women, exchange names and fuck. Same thing applies for the rest. A missed opportunity happened with Cheryl's mother. Instead of quickly fucking seconds after meeting, they both could've sat down and discuss what it means to marry a Succubus. Hell, this could've made James hesitate a bit as fucking a whole family Succubus and Incubus could be too much or even kill him. There would be some proper tension in which their relationship could be put to question. Just something else that doesn't have them touching each other's genitalia. I'm sure with the abundance of sex, a couple chapters without it wouldn't be a problem.

Let me list the positives since I don't need to delve to deep on them.

1. Lots of MILFs. Love them mommies.

2. The art is good. Honestly, anybody that can draw at all and that good automatically is a point up.

3.Leprechaun. Cause they're surprisingly absent in a lot of media nowadays. So it's nice to see another short stacked woman that's not a goblin, gnome or dwarf.

4. Casual sex and sex work. It's shown in a positive light and it's refreshing that they don't treat sex like this mystical custom that should only be done during very brief occasions. And I'm glad that James and Cheryl are in a relationship despite that, so that's awesome.

All in all, slightly disappointed with this reboot. I wish there was more to chew on, but maybe there'll be something in the future. Who knows? Anyways. Peace.

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Posted on 22 September 2021, 09:14 by: kIsho Acrerion Orion

@Revan: 15 comments, nobody give a shit about your blog every 4 pages, but at least be courteous and just edit them into single comment
fucking hilarious. I can't stop laughing. (monotone)

Posted on 15 October 2021, 03:26 by: Gabby Goat

Uh oh...it seems our boy Jameson has Incubus genes in this version too.

Posted on 06 April 2022, 13:20 by: darkskies2nite

Nothing added since October 22, 2021. Has this one been abandoned too?

Posted on 04 July 2022, 21:48 by: rencen

As I typed this, this comic is stop at Chapter 9 Page 11. Here is the link to page 12 and onward from the official website

https://www.sexyversecomics.com/deviants/nsfw-webcomic/comic/deviants-chapter-9-page-12/

You're welcome!

@ Lolzu Agree.

Well ok I didn't read all of the original comic pages but that version was definitely better than this reboot. The reboot has little plot and non existing lore! Least the original comic explained why the protagonist has pretty much unlimited stamia (he's an Incubus) compared to reboot that he's human but has unlimited stamia?

Also I find it hilarious how there was as plot development that he wanted to get to more her than just her body but then proceed to have more sex! Like he could of starts to asked what her likes and dislikes etc but nope, more sex!

I suppose the one good thing is the redesign to the succubus mother but honestly the redesign could of been pass more as the grandmother (gilf)!

Last edited on 23 August 2022, 20:34.

Posted on 23 August 2022, 15:39 by: emp100k

So as far as I have seen: everyone fucks everyone except for that tasty incest you know we're all craving...

Posted on 04 February 2023, 03:41 by: darkskies2nite

I liked the original but was very disappointed when the mixed:incest tag turned out to be a "bait and switch" tactic. Not a single instance of incest in the original. So then I see the reboot and as soon as I realized the artist / writer was using the Patreon website, that's when I knew an incest story arc would not be in this comic as Patreon prohibits artists / writers from posting comics containing that particular genre (or fetish) on their website. Of course there are other hosting websites that will let you create comics with an incest theme but I doubt the artist / writer of this comic will be switching to one of them any time soon. Especially as it appears no one is updating this version on this website any more. Oh well. (sad sigh)

Posted on 28 March 2023, 18:06 by: rencen

Wait, this came back to life or rather Viktor0nk is alived?! I mean the comic was still ongoing, you just have to go to the source! Like what give Votor0nk? Where have you been?

Posted on 28 March 2023, 18:43 by: God Revan

Holy shit! FINALLY! It's been updated! Praise be!!!!

Posted on 28 March 2023, 20:45 by: Lord Dashwood

You know what I find hilarious? Also updating today is Chain Reaction by Incognymous. That story basically exists to justify a bunch of teens/preteens fucking and yet it has a tighter plot, snappier dialogue, and better characterization in a silly little porn fanfic than this entire story.

Posted on 29 March 2023, 21:14 by: Gabby Goat

@Lord Dashwood "Whine whine whine, bitch bitch bitch!" Just get your rocks off to all the sex going on already!

Posted on 01 April 2023, 02:25 by: Kairu_Hakubi

Oh alright! Deviants is back? It's been a while.

Posted on 19 April 2023, 04:40 by: moldormyaboy30000

https://e-hentai.org/g/664642/0b9933306c/

https://e-hentai.org/g/2509159/9d71cc9c12/

Posted on 26 April 2023, 13:09 by: FarkyMac

Why are we keeping the old version of the comic in this gallery when it's never going to be continued? Why not make a separate gallery and let the discarded one...you know, be discarded?

Posted on 03 May 2023, 20:13 by: Gabby Goat

Finally!! We've reached the breeding chapter! We better see some sperm and egg action or else I riot!

Concluded!? Aww, can't we get just one more chapter after this?

Last edited on 02 June 2023, 19:58.

Posted on 10 June 2023, 13:54 by: HornySnakeWitch

Wait it's over? Or is this the beginning of something new? Love to see some pregnant Bellies.

Posted on 21 June 2023, 21:16 by: FarkyMac

The art kept getting worse and the writing kept getting dumber. Tragic.

Posted on 26 August 2023, 07:26 by: Fadedbackground

Story (though there wasn't much of one to start with) went downhill at chapter 11.

Posted on 09 September 2023, 07:52 by: worldofaniki

Kinda bummed that the artist heavily implied the MC family to be incestous yet never really made anything out of it besides one-page implied scene in page 241, despite all of them were shown to be just banging anyone elses.

Posted on 09 September 2023, 10:17 by: OccasionalGoldfish

Bro's final challenge is running the sex gauntlet... Give him your energy guys!

Posted on 09 September 2023, 21:02 by: TwistedGamer

Reboot would've been fine if the muscled blonde wasn't retconed into a futa. Fucking gross, and a dissapointment.

Posted on 11 September 2023, 06:40 by: BoobSaibot

Saw the updated pages of the final chapter and Bro.............Who in their right fucking mind hypes up Incest and then completely SKIPS it? And who in their right mind does that in the FINAL chapter?

That has got to be the dumbest shit Ive seen in a comic dude, what was the writer thinking??

Posted on 18 September 2023, 16:24 by: rencen

Are you shitting me? This is where it end? Not at either the wedding or the birth of their child (not graphic, just the two holding their baby)???? Yes I know it ends "for now" but it is still a shitting place to end it!

It's clear the writer lost steam way quicker than the first version and I was a fool to have followed this porno!

Last edited on 18 September 2023, 20:09.

Posted on 18 September 2023, 18:43 by: Gabby Goat

That was a pretty disappointing ending. Especially when they went back on the wincest. They better make up for that in the sequel.

Last edited on 21 September 2023, 05:13.

Posted on 19 September 2023, 01:45 by: Retconner

Let's be real, there wasn't gonna be any incest due to the writer still using that shitshow ya call Patreon...

Posted on 23 September 2023, 16:49 by: ivanl233

All of your comics looks conpletly horrible.

Posted on 30 September 2023, 07:26 by: God Revan

Congratulations to Sexyverse and Aya for completing Deviants! <3

Posted on 01 October 2023, 18:54 by: BoobSaibot

@God Revan What you mean congratulations? The ending was dog trash not only for the reason I mentioned above but it was effortless and rushed . The final chapter was to my surprise in fact the worst chapter. Ain't no congratulations lmao.

Last edited on 02 October 2023, 03:32.

Posted on 31 October 2023, 17:13 by: cropsy13

I thought the first version was better

Posted on 03 November 2023, 05:05 by: shadowshealth

i was really hoping to see the harem fully pregnant and somehow more horny than the MC and driving him in fearful state

Posted on 10 November 2023, 15:01 by: Ryona Sauce Boss

This good kush

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