Translators: EastFish & ZR
Typesetter: Nopan in Japan

RAW [Digital]: https://e-hentai.org/g/1124554/838d302b11/

Needed a first attempt for our group... this was it. Enjoy.

Are you by chance Laruffii? The quality of this release reminds me of it.

Here are some things I noticed:
- No proper punctuation. Some of the sentences end with a question mark, an ellipsis or a dash, but none with a period.
- You edit some moans in bubbles, but not all.
- I don't know what software you used, but rotated text (moans and "anus not found" on page 7, the text line on page 8 and the "brought to you by" on page 14) are really blurry.
- The original gallery size1.5 MB. Your's is >19 MB. Why did you convert the images to PNG?
- No levelling, no filtering, images are in 32 bit full colour mode, and not greyscale.

Base +6, 2158thKingofFap +6, 205780 +14, Lloydyykun +6, McMac91 +7, Winter is Cumming +6

...vcvcvcccvxxx

Base +4

dat p.5 TL note, I can't fap and laugh at the same time!

Base +12, Winter is Cumming +6, etamxes +5

Ok, it's solid first try with room for improvements.

This are my points for improvements
- T/L notes are not for commenting like you did or lol, wtf, etc. such comments belong to your credit page.
- western languages need punctuation
- for leveling tutorial look here: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main

And for the blurred rotated text if you use GIMP here is a shortend guide to avoid that
1. Type your text
2. create path from text
3. create new layer
4. make your path visible
5. manipulate your path
6. fill path

Base +13, Angry_Mushroom +6, Tophat_Joe +5

Art 4. Plot 4. Sexiness 3. Translation 3. True to character 4. All out of 10.

Base +9