[yasu] Ibitsu na Kankei ~Manatsu no YariCir Rankou Gasshuku~ - Distorted relationship Ch. 1 (COMIC Grape Vol. 57) [English] [DKKMD Translations]

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Posted on 19 June 2019, 18:43 by: penislord1

If I were in MC's shoes, I'd quit the club right then and there. No point in hanging around with people who hide shit behind your back like that.

Edit: you lads are the best!

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Posted on 19 June 2019, 19:20 by: Raynauld

I feel bad for that guy what a bunch of fucking pieces of shit

fuck. i even lost the powerboner i got while playing for honor, this made me lose my power

Posted on 19 June 2019, 19:36 by: father1

Wow that is messed up big time for the main male. Why they left him in the dark I have no clue, but at the same time it seems like they gave not a single fuck about it. The only silver lining (assuming this story doesn't destroy it) was the fact that the girl he was crushing on wasn't in that orgy.

Posted on 19 June 2019, 19:45 by: Larequirem

just how dense and naive are you when your entire club have orgy involving your childhood friend like everyday and you the only one who don't know anything

Posted on 19 June 2019, 20:00 by: bkku

Is it possible they just haven't initiated the two newbies into the club yet? Like orgy ritual to join the club on the last day?

Posted on 19 June 2019, 20:25 by: Hamjameter

lol. All those assholes left him out of the fun. Only him. Couldn't even bother to invite him to the orgy.

This did make me laugh a bit though. NTR sometimes gives me a good chuckle.

Can't fap to most NTR though, unless it's Rocket Monkey and there's a good oral creampie blowjob scene. Like this, this, or this, for example. Rocket Monkey's cum swallow scenes are some of the best.

But I digress...

Posted on 19 June 2019, 20:34 by: Jackrakan97

The one time I don't read tags.... I guess I'm somewhat lucky I'm in the mood for NTR sometimes. It definitely surprised me though.

Posted on 19 June 2019, 22:33 by: x0run

It's finally been translated... Thank you for the hard work!

Posted on 19 June 2019, 22:45 by: Forgunia

Considering the MC isn't unattractive and the fact that unattractive/nerdy dudes are part of the orgy as well, a plausible explanation for them leaving him out of it would be that the girl who wasn't part of the orgy is in love with the MC, and that the other girl doesn't want to ruin that by having them enter it. However, I doubt the MC will get such a vanilla ending with this girl, and that she is going to be doing stuff behind his back as well.

Posted on 20 June 2019, 00:38 by: MacacoLendario

I hope the artist makes a final chapter 5
The end was wide open (I was weak at the end of cap 4)

Posted on 20 June 2019, 02:26 by: SunsetChaos

Makes one wonder. Is the last girl innocent or fake? If she gives you the chance to be together, would you trust her or doubt her?

Posted on 20 June 2019, 02:34 by: bergil

Ah it's that hentai with the shitty timeskip and inconclusive ending. What a wasted potential.

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Posted on 20 June 2019, 02:39 by: smartz118

Why would they not tell the MC about the orgy? Do they just not like him?

Posted on 20 June 2019, 06:19 by: alonestalker

this shit gets me mad not because it was ntr what got me mad it was that they did so dirty to the mc like wtf they are having an orgy all of them and they dont invite him wtf what kind of friends are those

Posted on 20 June 2019, 10:22 by: docterderp

This is one of my worst fears. Being the ONE GUY who didn't get invited to the orgy. What do you even do in that situation?

Posted on 20 June 2019, 10:42 by: john34404

Been looking 4 this for 1/2 a year.

Posted on 20 June 2019, 13:16 by: bergil

@docterderp Well, you can fuck yourself while cursing your luck.

Posted on 20 June 2019, 14:36 by: N0bbody

If I had to take a guess, I'd say the girl that has a crush on him is the leader of the whole orgy group and is just searching for an opening to invite him in. Of course, then you'd have a couple of possibilities whether they'll go with more or less "soft NTR" aka "I love you, so let's all fuck together" or hard ntr where she just forces him to watch. Hope for the first or maybe just a simple vanilla ending.

Posted on 20 June 2019, 14:52 by: akiba-kei

Finally translated, thx for that. The first chap was the best for me. The rest was really bad, and the ending was so dissapointing, but Yasu said he will finish it when the tank comes out, and I just hope he delivers.

Posted on 20 June 2019, 15:11 by: KGFan

When everyone has an orgy but you're not invited that gotta suck

Posted on 20 June 2019, 16:38 by: bergil

@N0bbody Looking at the raws and knowing what will happen cant be called "taking a guess" .

Posted on 20 June 2019, 18:34 by: father1

@ bergil

Looked at the raws myself, and I have to say at least with this one they didn't use some of the more Cliche things with NTR such as "his dick was too small" or something like that. All in all I have to say I can't wait until this one is fully translated after seeing the raws.

Though if I had to guess with that last page and her expression while she knew she was in the club and doing wrong if I had to guess she was thinking her love was too good and would never join the club only for her hopes to be shattered when she saw it was him who not only fucked but creampied her as well.

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Posted on 20 June 2019, 21:18 by: Shadpw_Strider

Found a synopses of what happens in the raws and this shit gets crazy lol. There will be a yandere tag in future chapters because some characters aren't what they seem to be lol.

Posted on 20 June 2019, 21:23 by: TheMoondoggie

>someone finally translated this
Damn it. Boner and despair, but also gratitude to the translator.

Posted on 21 June 2019, 00:13 by: Raynauld

nope still can't jack the willy to this it makes me too sad fuck you author

Posted on 21 June 2019, 01:09 by: Rokehe

I like NTR but this one just doesn't feel right.

Posted on 21 June 2019, 09:05 by: bergil

Great, morons downvoted the NTR tag even though this is clearly NTR.

Posted on 21 June 2019, 20:47 by: Aelth

Reading the original, the end is unsatisfying, the people who deserve to be punished get away while the MC is completely played, but I guess a lot of cucks are into that kind of shit. And this is completely 100% the definition of NTR. While he isn't partners with any of them before he finds out they are fucking, NTR tag is "Also acceptable for when the story is clearly meant to invoke jealousy or sympathy on behalf of the person being cuckolded."

Posted on 22 June 2019, 07:52 by: bakalicious

What to do when you come across NTR:

1) Make a strong effort to imagine yourself as one of the scumbag males, self-insert as one of them.
2) If you're still not happy with the above, try reading Kizashi: https://e-hentai.org/g/1193828/3544fa59c6/

Posted on 23 June 2019, 06:38 by: ZeroXSEED

Which one of you retards downvoted the NTR tag?

Posted on 04 July 2019, 14:53 by: dgjdgjdgj

Aw, shit here we go again with the drama queen.

Posted on 04 July 2019, 14:56 by: Valkyr

@bkku
MC said that every year they have a trip like this...would they really be potential new members if the entire orgy has been happening for years?

Posted on 04 July 2019, 15:23 by: core1991

Page 14. I thought the guy would go yan for a moment there. You wanted yotaro now? after knowing he just discovered your dirty little secret? It ain't gonna happen. Glad the MC won't be lonely... in the end. Good going for the other girl. You got your guy. Now don't let him go because surely the next capter will be the other girl gonna try to take him away. If the MC is a dumb cunt he will break the loyal girl's heart. I'm hoping he'll be smart about it.

Posted on 04 July 2019, 15:25 by: ssj782

I'm a bit confused. If they aren't actually together, is it really NTR? She wasn't stolen from him. She wasn't his in the first place...

Posted on 04 July 2019, 15:27 by: DiaStarkLordoftheBed

Why didn't he leave the club? Best option, just distance himself from all of them.

Posted on 04 July 2019, 15:27 by: kutechip

yes, 2 chapters more please

Posted on 04 July 2019, 15:27 by: Min The Egyptian

poor guys he should just go out of town and go to other place and start new life...what a unsatisfied ending
BTW i already read the RAW

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Posted on 04 July 2019, 16:50 by: SyriasX

dont worry everyone. the real ending is the MC becomes part of the rape group.

>>>>>>>(Spoilers)<<<<<<<<<

essentially the whole situation was created by the girl the MC fucks because she knew that the other girl and MC were close and being a yandere she wanted to ruin their relationship. so she gets the scumbags the dirt they need to get her to have orgies with them and while the sex is 'good' she still feels guilty and 'hasn't fallen to sex'.

later the MC find out about the whole plan and that yandere is pregnant with his kid so his life is fucked

Posted on 04 July 2019, 16:54 by: Yefta

Moral of this tankoubon : Don't trust anyone.

Posted on 04 July 2019, 18:20 by: Pheebe

thinking emoji much

Posted on 04 July 2019, 22:26 by: TheMoondoggie

I saw the RAWs and I feel like the author threw the whole plot out of the window and said, "You know what? Let's just make all of them fuck. Just fuck, for the sake of fucking."

Posted on 05 July 2019, 06:14 by: SyriasX

@ TheMoondoggie

to be honest that is a rare conclusion to NTR, not as rare as 'MC makes a comeback and doesnt fuck up' but still not the norm. thing is its most likely a bad attempt at trying to give you mixed feelings about the primary characters. the story wants to throw you for a loop with your opinion of the girl even though all that happened is she went from a slut to the generic and passive "i still love ___-chan" NTR girl changing her place in the story.... not at all. with the MC we'll see him join the rape orgy essentially elevating him a step above the NTR "ill become a shut in for the rest of my life while getting heckled with messages from someone i liked from long ago" and the beta bitches with erectile dysfunction or micro penises that end up either the bottom bitch below the girl they lost or are left to 'misfire' while watching their girl

this story has around the best outcome you could 'expect' from most NTR

Posted on 05 July 2019, 08:38 by: bloodred

1st chapter of this really reminds me of the hotspring chapter from Chunrouzan

https://e-hentai.org/s/1016b757a1/215597-177

Posted on 05 July 2019, 09:13 by: hebelele

Moral of all NTR: Don't trust anyone.

Posted on 05 July 2019, 12:55 by: bergil

SyriasX is being a whiny butthurt vanillafag as usual. Hopefully when the tank is released we will get a more conclusive ending and maybe some more scenes to fill that gap after the time skip.

Posted on 06 July 2019, 00:38 by: fapfag2

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Posted on 06 July 2019, 14:20 by: iiLunar

All this talk about the RAWs made me go check it out. Yep, my brain 404'd during that final chapter. An interesting approach to say the least.

Posted on 07 July 2019, 15:11 by: bergil

@ fapfag2

You got it all wrong. The problem is not the mc being hated but how he was tricked. Here is what happened in a nutshell:

The mc and the childhood friend secretly like each other but since they are both shy they don't confess their feelings, they are both members of a club including the sister of the mc, the glasses chairman and the yandere girl. Yandere girl has a huge crush on the mc and knows that he has feelings for the childhood friend, so in order to get the mc for herself she makes a deal with the chairman in which she arranges the childhood friend getting raped by the chairman in return for giving her anal virginity to the chairman.

As a result, the childhood friend becomes a slut who has orgies with other club members , the mc's sister also turns into a slut and gets pregnant, and then has sex with the mc, showing how broken she became, and the yandere girl gets the mc for herself and gets herself pregnant with his baby. At the end the mc punches the chairman, though we don't see it, and joins the orgy and fucks the childhood friend who has turned into a slut for the whole club now. The important thing is the mc is broken like the others now and lost all the love he felt for the childhood friend, and now she is just another hole for him to fuck.

Another point of interest is that while the mc's sister and the childhood friend don't know for sure who got them pregnant , it's certain that it was the mc who got the yandere girl pregnant, so he can't easily break things up with her, even though it was her who fucked up his life in the first place. It's pretty much certain that the other club members won't take responsibility for the babies, so it's possible at the previously mentioned epilogue, that is supposed to come with the tank, we will see the mc getting stuck with taking care of three babies while the others keep having orgies and having fun.

Does this still feel like a good ending to you?

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Posted on 07 July 2019, 17:44 by: fapfag2

Thanks, it makes more sense now.

Posted on 08 July 2019, 16:42 by: joshgrrr

This hurt me in my guts

10/10

Posted on 13 July 2019, 14:04 by: medjay

lol, whatever man. it has good pic and UNCENSORED
good enough for me, at least it's just picture but not IRL
heck there even might a good rewrite, somewhere in the future

Posted on 13 July 2019, 21:11 by: bergil

@medjay It's not uncensored you moron, it's mildly censored.

Posted on 17 July 2019, 23:26 by: amt

This seems like it should be NTR tagged because of the second part of the ntr tag definition? Either way though wish I didn't have to see shit like this while filtering ntr tagged galleries lol.

Posted on 20 July 2019, 05:08 by: FreeMan1231

dam, this is best for some time NTR story here, childhood friend whos hooked on classmates dicks, 39 - this fresh cum dripping from her after orgy in onsen and she tried to hide it, so sweet...

Posted on 20 July 2019, 20:02 by: billbrown

Normally NTR's silly plot justifications don't bother me and I just enjoy the corruption aspect of it, but this series got me a raging justice boner for some reason. This boy should be out for blood, but judging from the raws he ends up corrupted too.

Posted on 05 September 2019, 01:06 by: Hakrei

The MC is at fault for not locking down a drop-dead sexy childhood friend when he had the chance...
The girl's at fault for voluntary being a slut and used goods...
That's how NTR is supposed to work though...

Posted on 28 September 2019, 19:20 by: john34404

Needs male:mind_break

Posted on 28 September 2019, 19:44 by: sharksandrec

How many times can everyone complain about the exact same NTR tropes? Jesus christ.

Posted on 28 September 2019, 19:47 by: cs997c65gd

what is the endgame of chairman jesus christ

Posted on 28 September 2019, 20:59 by: CaiNa

that ***** is gay for the mc, calling it now

Posted on 28 September 2019, 22:03 by: knucklesluigi

@Hakrei Why is it just the MC's fault for not locking down the relationship with the childhood friend? They both loved each other and both didn't ask each other out because they were both shy. That at the very least makes it both their faults. Also if you've seen most NTRs you would know that locking down a relationship with someone doesn't mean shit even if he married her this would still happen; the huge amount of the wife NTR proves that. As a matter a fact you are probably more likely to get NTR'd by getting married.

Posted on 28 September 2019, 22:24 by: Exhis

this is such a fucking buzzkill like right away.

Posted on 29 September 2019, 01:44 by: kurehayagami

All these commenters saying 'how dense MC can be to not realizing his friends fucking behind his back', but I'm pretty sure y'all in real life won't realize your sweetheart and girls you're interested in is actually a huge slut who fucks dude with dick and money left and right.

*Insert 'why are you booing me? I'm right.' meme*

Posted on 29 September 2019, 01:52 by: Arutima

Bitches and whores

Posted on 29 September 2019, 04:29 by: dap00

You know what, I'm just going to ignore the plot to destroy the MC's love interest.
There are three parts in particular that bug me.
1) The MC complains that they left him out, but when the cute girl approaches him, he resists! Which suggests even if they had invited him, he would have refused. He doesn't seem open to new things. And being his family and closest friends, they probably already know that about him. So why would they invite him?
2) What is the MC supposed to think, if he sees several guys banging his crush, but she won't let him touch her? Especially when every other girl either jumps him or doesn't refuse him? Sure, misunderstandings can happen, but if she'd just thrown herself at him on the beach they might have been able to skip all this.
3) Okay, the last chapter is the worst. Nobody gets who they want, one girl is drinking beer while pregnant, that douchebag guy is smoking right in front of what I assume is his baby. So you know those kids are already doomed.

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Posted on 29 September 2019, 08:31 by: thefakeguy

That's right kids, if you go out and grab a random woman's head and make her eat your dick, you too will have a cock craved whore for life!

Posted on 29 September 2019, 09:07 by: SadiCWin32.exe

Absolutely terrible manga.

Posted on 29 September 2019, 11:25 by: dgjdgjdgj

What i feel good about this show is....MC has a big cock and not just some whimp cuck who nerver get laid.

Posted on 29 September 2019, 21:14 by: chefscoccer

pretty sad . didnt even get a boner

Posted on 29 September 2019, 22:04 by: Stephen9001

Well, this is better than normal NTR in that the MC actually ends up getting to have sex with girls, even if it means becoming a cynic who thinks women are just bitches and whores, that's a step up from the usual "no girls love him, he faps to videos of them being sluts with other men" and whatnot.

Posted on 30 September 2019, 11:49 by: hatepie

Fuck these shitty characters.

Posted on 30 September 2019, 14:53 by: Zantetsu

If I were that guy I'd have bailed ages ago. Fuck these assholes.

Posted on 30 September 2019, 21:35 by: jason kimbrough

@Stephen9001 That's pretty cynical for you to say. That ending makes us too cynical, if you ask me. Because it's stupid. What's yasu's deal about their work?

Posted on 01 October 2019, 12:21 by: seba19

Ive read hundreds of ntr stories but this and a few other have left me hurting or angry because of the story, the moment the girl showed the glasses dude she was pregnant and immediatly going to cheat on him I was like "fuck this, why, mc doesnt deserve all this shit" I find it realistic that the mc becomes cynical, discovering in the same weak that your sister is a slut that sleeps around, your childhood friend too(but she was coerced into and ended up loving it) and your other friend is just pure evil who cheats on you after dropping the pregnant bomb and that all of your male friends are the ones who are fucking(and will fuck in the immediate future) them, it would break a man, its hard not to feel for him
If you are wondering the other stories that make me mad are https://e-hentai.org/g/1416176/b1e97783b7/ (spoilers: no happy ending for anyone, at least the fat ugly teacher gets his comeuppance) and https://e-hentai.org/g/1189711/8abffa0c7e/ because every single charachter is so stupid, like damn, I know ntr plots are normally idiotic, but this one threw me for a loop for some reason, even the "bad guy" is stupid and only gets away with everything because everyone else is dumber than him. Still fapped to it, art is too hot not to do it.

Posted on 02 October 2019, 15:25 by: bananahabroh

hoo boi i can't wait for the afterstory

Posted on 02 October 2019, 15:52 by: DeviHyuga

Didnt see any of these twists coming. Like a roller coaster of emotion.

Posted on 02 October 2019, 16:15 by: qwiql

"plausible explanation"... hentai. "PLAUSIBLE EXPLANATION" and ntr hentai with "rape", "mind break" and all this shit... ffs.
Comments best part of this tag.

Posted on 02 October 2019, 17:19 by: UrusaiSenpai

is the "[yasu] Ibitsu na Kankei ~after~" gonna be translated too? :>
Thanks btw! always wanteed to know the story.

Posted on 02 October 2019, 17:35 by: Reunsigned

>owari
Fucking hell.

Posted on 02 October 2019, 19:46 by: imthedouchebag

Yeah the "After" story of the tankoubon seems quite chill. MC and childhood friend never talk to each other again but for what it seems, he just moved on with his life and baby mama while still getting extra puss on the side.

Posted on 02 October 2019, 20:06 by: spidib

this needs more chapters to explain everything

started off well but went sideways

Posted on 02 October 2019, 20:30 by: ReactFAP

The girlfriend already agreed to join the orgy but anal sex only, but the chairman ruined it, we could've seen the girlfriend having an anal orgy! Damn I wanted to see that!

Posted on 02 October 2019, 21:03 by: Darudius

So in the end the MC kind of won? Looking at this chapter and the after chapter. Its still a little sad obviously but looking at the after story and this chapter, he completely disgusted by Miyuki now anyway so he hasn't got much to lose. And then he has 2 bitches he fucks anyway. Again not the happiest of endings but certainly not the worst I've seen.

Posted on 02 October 2019, 21:08 by: godlike13

So in the end the childhood friend becomes something of a prostitute, while the MC moves on as a dead on the inside alpha. The girl who manipulated the whole thing still bangs the MC, but doesn't really get him as he's now just cold and jaded and is with other girls.

Posted on 03 October 2019, 00:00 by: VNProtagonist

Is this really how it ends? Seems like a huge jump from ch 3 to ch 4.

Posted on 03 October 2019, 00:10 by: Kasuchi

I hope the never happens to any of you guys. Be safe.

Posted on 03 October 2019, 02:41 by: Stephen9001

In some ways, this is almost worse than normal NTR where the guy masterbates to videos of his girl getting fucked, here the guy abandons his love and becomes an immense cynic, whereas normal NTR victims remain obsessed with the one they love. Still, unlike those other guys he gets to have sex in the end, but was it worth killing his ability to love?

Personally I still prefer this, since it seems a more reasonable response then going "I still love you" when the girl says she loves big dicks more than you, though in this case, the girl actually retained affection for the guy (even if she did still become a cock hungry slut), which is part of what makes this arguably worse than normal. I'm not sure if worse is the right word even, but, more tragic? Yeah, this scenario where the guy becomes jaded and starts to see women as holes to fuck is both less pathetic than the usual scenario, and yet also more tragic.

Posted on 03 October 2019, 04:18 by: BZo1480

Personally, it feels like Yoshino is the biggest loser in all of this. Sure, she got pregnant with Kotaro's kid like she wanted, but her scheming broke him so completely that even though he eventually let her back in his life, it's just as another hole to fuck and forget. He's never going to care for their kid when it's born and he'll never ever love her again no matter what she does. It's a hell of her own making that she completely deserves. Doesn't really make up for this shitheap of a story, but it's somewhat nice to see the main schemer in an NTR story get some form of comeuppance.

Posted on 03 October 2019, 12:05 by: dgjdgjdgj

What it's END !!?? like this !? what a cliffhanger.
edit : there's a after story, now i'm waiting for it

Posted on 03 October 2019, 14:44 by: poke--

What did the childhood friend thinking? After all this he will come back for you?

Posted on 03 October 2019, 15:30 by: Draw99Gray

I usually like NTR, but this is just plain retarded

Posted on 03 October 2019, 15:50 by: Min The Egyptian

the glasses chairman must have satisfying ending if this have after story....i need him suffer the most

Posted on 04 October 2019, 06:07 by: Zamandreis

Yeah, uh, where the hell is the netorare tag and why isn’t it able to be added? Shit like this is why you can’t trust the tagging system, if chucklefucks “believe” a tag shouldn’t be around and enough people “believe” it, in spite of reality being the opposite, the system goes with what people “believe.”

What a crapshow.

Posted on 04 October 2019, 12:03 by: Gorillez

This really needs a netorare tag.

Posted on 05 October 2019, 03:31 by: reaper_day

Why the chairman's face got hurt?, what promise it's Mizuki talking about?, it feels like there's some hole between ch.3 and 4 explaying all that!!!

Posted on 05 October 2019, 11:37 by: ghini

I do get the story like this so far and in my opinion it needs a yandere tag:

MC has a crush on his busty childhood friend
Childhood friend has a crush on MC,
the petite pretend-to-be-innocent girl has a crush on MC and is a yandere,
the chairman who started the orgy party thing.

Since the MC has a crush on his childhood friend, the yandere petite girl wants him for herself and what most commenters here didnt notice, she was not only making a deal with the chairman to rape the childhood friend, but was also fliming the incident. You can clearly see the petite girl her having a mobile phone playing that video while saying she loves watching it. She wanted the childhood friend to be taken away so she could give her virginity to the MC and even got pregnant with his baby to make him bond with her. Clearly yandere. Her part of the deal with the chairman was to participate in the orgy, but as she is mentally disturbed in love with the MC, she will only tolerate anal sex with the others so her pussy is exclusively for MC. With that video of the rape incident the childhood friend is blackmailed to participate in the orgy and to stay away from MC. Maybe that is why it is not considered netorare. The childhood friend still loves MC but is blackmailed.

But why would the chairman do all this just to get the petite girl to participate in the orgy? I think he secretly has a crush on the petite girl who loves the MC and is pulling strings to make her his girl in the end. He secretly made a promise with the childhood friend to endure it until he made the petite girl his girl and promised the childhood friend to get together with the MC in the end. Maybe it will turn out this way.

Posted on 05 October 2019, 22:00 by: BZo1480

@reaper_day The epilogue will answer both of those questions, or at least the first one.

Posted on 07 October 2019, 14:53 by: maxx26

The story is depressing as fuck but well written. The way I see it Kotaro’s problem was whether Miyuki was the whore she was acting like or not. Throughout the story we see he goes back and forth on that especially after he learned that Yoshino instigated her rape and planed to blackmail Miyuki with the video, probably to keep her away from Kotaro. We know that Miyuki did love him and didn’t think she deserved to be together with him after what happened to her. Yoshino also did set everything up to make Kotaro not love her anymore as we can see by what she said in chapter 4 about her acting like a complete whore. I think Kotaro believed that she and lost all faith in women given how Miyuki acted and the fact that his own sister wanter to sleep with him probably made him more inclined to view all women as nothing but whores. But Miyuki’s internal monologue, where she said that thinking about him is what got her through the ordeal she found herself in, makes me think she might not have been a complete whore. I’m not 100 on that though Because she also did seem to be enjoying the sex which makes me think that she’s just making excuses. What I’m not clear on is the chairman’s reason for what he did, I personally think he liked Yoshino. There are some missing points and personally I would like it if the story was longer but it tells a complete story as is so hey what can I do. I Can’t fap to this though too depressing for me.

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Posted on 08 October 2019, 19:17 by: TVGuru1234

NTR Asshole: "You thought it was only the girls I was trying to corrupt, but I was after the MC as well!"

Posted on 12 October 2019, 14:02 by: Arkaleus

Huge fan of the art, hope more of yasu gets translated

Posted on 12 October 2019, 14:34 by: DiaStarkLordoftheBed

Wait, she got pregnant by a guy she knew would never care about her? Hold up, she had this chick raped for a guy she only known for a short time? The fuck?! My head hurts.

Posted on 12 October 2019, 16:02 by: dgjdgjdgj

Now i wanna punch someone face like MC did with that ending. Farewell, from now on i don't have to always see this shit again while i'm surfing for ENG translate doujin/manga.

Posted on 12 October 2019, 16:41 by: jeem02

sofieidkdg

Posted on 12 October 2019, 18:46 by: necrololic0n

Series had so much potential but I feel like the author gave up at last 2 chapters, I wonder why...

Posted on 12 October 2019, 19:04 by: Tru_Zen123

You plot to completely mess a guys life up just to date him, he finds out (don't know if Yoshino knows that part tbh), and have the audacity to say "I want him to care about me". Man for once I'm glad virtually no one in a NTR story has a happy ending*.

*Kotaro and Miyuki, despite being pretty much broken by this seems to be enjoying their lives. As does the sister. She really has no signs of regret since she's like the only one that really got what she wanted.

Posted on 12 October 2019, 19:35 by: UrusaiSenpai

Kotaro found what really happened between all of them and completely shut any feelings he had for Yoshino & anybody involved in the Orgy party.
Yoshino may had loved Kotaro but her plan back fired so hard than she completely lost him and he doesn't even care about the child either.

Miyuki were threatened so she "didn't" really have any choice in the matter but Kotaro didn't care, he used to love her but not anymore then just abandoned her too.

In the after story Miyuki doesn't want to go to the Orgy party anymore but still craves sex and just finds "random" people to have sex with (i think)
With Kotaro i'm not sure if he is looking for, Yoshino's friend did refer Kotaro as Yoshino boyfriend but i dont believe they are. Kotaro told them to leave also so not sure what they really are. Sexfriends i guess?

Only person that really got a happy ending was the Sister. Got a kid with that Glass guy and seems happy.

The worst one is probably Yoshino to see the one she loves the most doesn't have a single strain of affection for her or the child & also have to witness him going on dates with anybody other that her.

For Miyuki, her life is just full of regret, i think she is using sex to escape the pain and that's why she does what she does but she does smile in the last panel so she may at some point get over it.

Good and sad story. 5/5

Posted on 12 October 2019, 22:14 by: Xarxyc

Yeah, you can see author gave up after chapter 2. Too bad, the story had potential.

Posted on 12 October 2019, 23:55 by: Stephen9001

The guy seems... less broken in the end, but he's still fucking a bunch a girls, hasn't reconciled with the girl he originally liked (nice fakeout at the end there author/artist) and doesn't seem to care about the girl who bears his kid (for very understandable reasons), end conclusion, still better than normal NTR overall, but also still more sad, due to lacking the near comical effect a girl just admitting to loving big dicks more than her boyfriend/husband has (or is finding that comical just a developed resistance I have now?).

Posted on 13 October 2019, 02:01 by: allelujahhaptism

I want the time I spent reading this back.

Posted on 13 October 2019, 02:16 by: Kamianme

at the end i can say that girl has bad taste for men

Posted on 13 October 2019, 03:29 by: maxx26

There are several hints that the author had more planned for the story like Miyuki’s inner monologue in chapter 4 or the glasses guy’s reasons for doing what he did. Maybe the author got bored of the story like others have said or it didn’t get the response he wanted. Either way the ending wasn’t as bad as it could have been and there’s always a chance we cloud get new chapters that end the story on a better note..... right who am I kidding. Pretty much treated this like a manga instead of hentai and got some slight depression from it. Still can’t masturbate to it or any of the author’s other works for that matter, holding out for some vanilla works from him though cause his art is really good.

Posted on 13 October 2019, 03:35 by: Toramaru22

Wait, that's the end? I thought that this will go on about 6-7 chapters. The ending is pretty disappointing.

Posted on 13 October 2019, 04:32 by: blackkat101

Wow, normally like Yasu's stuff but this was just terrible. Nice art, but everything from the characters to how it all ended was just crap. Really ruined the mood. I mean, it could have been saved if something worse than just a little tap on the cheek to the main antagonists. But nope, everyone that did anything bad, even the tag a longs got off scott free. Everything was just depressing and I normally can get off to almost any tag (but scat, guro, diaper and toddlercon, those just are not for me).

Posted on 13 October 2019, 06:39 by: ElderC

I fucking hate netonare

Posted on 13 October 2019, 07:29 by: Raynauld

YEEEEES!

FUCK YOU! HE GOT A HAPPY ENDING WHILE THE WHORES WERE LEFT BEHIND
I feel warm inside now :)

Posted on 13 October 2019, 08:41 by: iiLunar

@Raynauld
I'm not really sure I'd say he got a happy end. But ending itself is what you make of it. A character like him would be interesting to break down and figure out how he's really handling things mentally. Both pages 98 and 101 aren't as open about how he's coping as the ending itself. I think the best way to put it is he's a refurbished vase from a shady shop. Sure he looks great from afar but if you get a closer look you can see the cracks.

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Posted on 13 October 2019, 12:02 by: Darudius

So do miyuki and Kotaro keep meeting up and fucking? Or was that panel towards the end with them going to hold hands a flashback?

Posted on 13 October 2019, 12:42 by: Ryuufap

@Darudius
Take another look at it. The author made it look like they were meeting up for a date, but did a 380 twist and showed them with different partners. Miyuki was holding onto some overweight otaku lookin' guy.

Posted on 13 October 2019, 12:54 by: Darudius

@Ryuufap,

Ah gotcha. So Miyukis no longer a part of the orgy but just fucks random people. Shes clearly addicted to sex and its gotta be better than being a prostitute. Why not just go to the orgy parties at that point?

Posted on 13 October 2019, 15:03 by: shadow flux1

how the fuck does this not have the netorare tag allowed on it? the whole fucking story is full of it.

Posted on 13 October 2019, 16:03 by: stopwatch

"There are 67 more comments below the viewing threshold"

Yo wtf

Posted on 13 October 2019, 16:48 by: different

I met a girl like Miyuki recently, but she wasn't raped or had any logical reason why she enjoyed cocks as much as she did. She was just kinda emotionally neglected as a child, so now she makes up for all of that by fucking as many guys as possible and cheating on them.

Posted on 14 October 2019, 01:41 by: Fate Averruncus

Jesus fuck. Why is netorare a downvoted tag on this??? Like, I try my best to avoid this shit by actually PUTTING the -netorare in the searchbar to avoid this and somehow this makes it under the radar? What the fuck.

Posted on 15 October 2019, 02:57 by: yasulong

You guy seriously thinking this is NTR? Boys, you need to stop using NTR as the one-for-all term for all the revolting shit you hates. Please re-read the definition of NTR then comes back here and see my details on each girl:
- The sister: a slut who just want to try incest, zero interest at her brother, the feeling's mutual.
- Yoshino: despite being a scheming bitch, she's at least consistent on one thing: being loyal to Kotaro. The anal are merely paycheck she promised to the boys, and she needs the boys to keep Miyuki stay stuffed with cocks, so killing them yandere-style isn't an option. She even okay with him having other sexfriends as long as he stayed with her, if that isn't dedicated love, I don't know what is in this shitfest.
- Miyuki: the big elephant. The thing is, she and Kotaro was NEVER in any official relationship, nothing beyond being childhood friends. And that's an core condition of NTR that most of you might have skipped over. They has feeling for each other, but neither makes it vocal. Has they actually talked that night, they could have achieved something, but both picked the wrong choice. And paid the prices.

TL;DR: none of the relationships in this qualify for NTR tag, hence, no NTR-tag.

Posted on 16 October 2019, 01:51 by: Anus1234567

I like the "worse than normal NTR" comments, because moving on knowing a girl you used to like is fucking a guy/guys you consider to be worse than you while being married to someone you don't particular like is basically just life. The only difference here is that there's a little more drama thrown into the mix.

Posted on 18 October 2019, 01:11 by: RPX

The ending was bitter sweet. It could have been a lot better if Yoshio would have gotten an hard core beat down, her child aborted, and Kotaro 100% completely cut her off. The rest of the ending can stay the same. and been a lot more satisfying.

Posted on 21 October 2019, 08:53 by: Loki The Flameshield

Well...fuck

Posted on 28 October 2019, 13:10 by: John Darksabre

The title is very apt for this story. There are many orgy eromanga, but there is not much orgy eromanga that focuses on real world implications. It's almost always extreme rape or extreme happy sex. This is refreshing in a way.

Posted on 05 November 2019, 09:19 by: wolewahh

YA...WHAT A SHIT THIS IS

Posted on 22 November 2019, 01:56 by: KILLAVOLT8

NTRASH is just NTRASH!

Posted on 22 November 2019, 03:19 by: licks dongs

I have never been this infuriated by a comic in my life. This has managed to boil my blood in an unprecedented way and now I want to physically harm whoever downvoted the ntr tag. Truly a masterpiece of rage inducing disgust

Posted on 29 November 2019, 01:26 by: byran47

Interesting, not a horrible ending. The two main perps of this got some form of comeuppance, especially the girl. Dude is only interested in sex now because of them. They could have gone more into the ending though, being not horrible for an NTR ending isn't saying much at all.

Posted on 14 December 2019, 20:39 by: ayami123

Missing 1 chapter

Posted on 19 December 2019, 16:26 by: Night_stayer

I would love to shoot everyone here to death with short barreled battle rifle loaded with overpressured cartridge

Posted on 22 December 2019, 02:10 by: onlythebiggest

i'm having trouble figuring out how many girls there are. in the first few pages we have "hair clip girl" and "striped bra girl" but then on page 5 theres "plaid bra girl" who doesn't show up at the orgy?, then at the orgy theres white haired girl and just.. s;lkdfjs how many girls total are there in this?

Posted on 29 December 2019, 07:48 by: Kobq

holy shit！！！ WTF ending ？！ i can‘t understand or accept it ！ who can solve my question ？ what happened between MC and his childhood girl？

Posted on 30 December 2019, 20:19 by: ExtremeRampage

I actually like how MC got "woke" on women lol. He doesn't give a fuck anymore about love and shit unlike +90% of other NTR MC's who cry pathetically after their roastie thot gf. And the scheming bitch just got a pyrrhic victory. While she did manage to destroy the MCs relationship with his crush, she didn't win his love and can't even say anything about him becoming a man-whore and fucking whoever he likes because he knows about their past, fucking other dudes etc.

@different
Thots having daddy-issues is a pretty common meme. Boys, when neglected or not having a dad, are usually pretty unsuccessful in life and often turn to criminality while girls turn into roastie thots/whores/porn stars etc. Don't know which is worse tbh.

@licks dongs
Chill. I've read way worse stuff which gets you way angrier lol. Mainly because of the cucked MC who just lets himself get trampled over/cries like a bitch/still "loves" his roastie thot or, of course when the thot intentionally gets fucked and cucks MC without his knowledge, although that might be more on the "cheating" side than NTR.

@byran
Agreed. For an NTR ending, this is actually pretty good, at least for the MC who just doesn't give a fuck anymore and isn't a pathetic crying beta bitch. The "ex-love interest" though just seems broken and still seems to be depressed and thinks about the MC and tries to forget by becoming an even bigger slut.

@onlythebiggest
I feel kind of similar, to be honest, but to be fair I just quickly read through this. Maybe if you read slower you can actually tell them apart better or something, idk.

@Kobq:
As far as I understood it, they just went their separate ways. MC doesn't give a fuck anymore. The pregnant.scheming girl who planned all this won in driving them apart but lost in getting his love. And the best part is about the two girls at the end complaining is, they can't say anything about the MC fucking other girls beside them because he knows about them (still?) fucking other guys in the past.

Posted on 30 January 2020, 05:01 by: finalfantasy7

In the page 72 is that Yoshino or Miyuki? This artist cant make different characters, almost all the same xd

Posted on 16 February 2020, 12:22 by: vikingar

I don't know who's cucking who.jpg
Doesn't help in greyscale every girl looks almost the same moreso than your average manga with equally impenetrable names.

This is the first piece of NTR that is truly unfappable. Hurts the soul reading this, even though the "I'll convince everyone to have wild sex parties to get sempai's attention by making his crush damaged goods" main plot is as unrealistic as mind control or CHAD FAT OLD MAN stealing your girl. Solid 11/10 uncomfortable read from pg9 to 109.

Posted on 18 February 2020, 05:18 by: Apercent

Not only is this the stupidest shit I've read in a while, it managed to make me hate the MC. What a fucking dipshit. Finds out his best friend was raped and all he can think about is "oh poor old me". Like seriously fuck off

Posted on 25 February 2020, 19:43 by: stryfer

this dj makes my brain to have less cells in it

Posted on 27 March 2020, 23:26 by: tearsax

1- I've seen lots and lots of works tagged as female:netorare with no reason, but this one isnt? But its tagged as male:netorare? Wtf.
2- So the chairman just gets out with a punch? He raped, blackmailed and turned into a whore your childhood friend, the girl you love, and thats it?
3- MC is still with the thot who planned all this? LOL
4- I would have liked to know if the other girls were also forced like Miyuki or if not, if they know about what happened to her.
5- When i read the "sister" tag i thought "well, some incest, i dont care" but after reading for a while i was like "is he really gonna fuck this bitch?"
6- So Miyuki, the only one we know for sure that was against her will there, and its the only one the MC gets mad at even tho he knows she is being forced? Someone please, crack his skull open.

This series has a lot of things that can piss or tick off people. I guess everyone has their owns. The biggest one for me? The sister. She is family ffs, if she knew what was going on with Miyuki and didnt do shit, be it my sister or not, i would mess her face so bad that no one would ever look at her without feeling nausea.
But well, this whole series has messed up logic even for hentai. Its unique purpose is to make others feel pissed without caring how stupid everything looks like.

@dap00: you should re-read it because, damn son, you didnt get a single thing right.

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Posted on 18 August 2020, 16:34 by: Cure

Well I didn't cum and I feel like crap.
Thanks NTR!

Posted on 30 August 2020, 08:27 by: Dyed_00

this was crap, I also feel like crap, nice

Posted on 11 September 2020, 04:39 by: Highfist

This is just sad and weird. The dude is broken and his gf set up hiss childhood friend to get raped and then turn her in a whore while also spouting some bullshit about being in love with him even when she is getting buttfucked as part of some deal. Idk I just feel gross and I don’t know how the guy could stand to be around all these whores. And even at the end they seemed to have gone out together and fucked different people. I should have looked at the fucking tag that’s my fault

Posted on 06 October 2020, 09:42 by: Yachiyo

Damn this story hits you really hard initially since you want them to be together. It actually isn't that bad tho for anyone who is scarred. Take a break and read it again later. MC begins to think all girls are sluts and sees his "GF" betray him and setup his childhood friend. He wants to trust said childhood friend but is convinced to give up on her instead. In the end he's just a player now. He won't have any meaningful relationships and will just have many sex friends instead.

Posted on 09 October 2020, 17:19 by: RaizelX

So I waited a long time before checking this out and all I can say after seeing the comments and reading it is “eh” the story felt kind of rushed and had that vague ending of maybe everyone regrets it also all the characters were being kind of dumb.eh it also wasted a lot of potential especially whe it seems to introduce 2 new characters near the end, all in all this one was kind of “whatever” to me. Also it feels like it’s missing pages or something

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Posted on 16 October 2020, 01:54 by: kite722

Nobody wins and everybody is miserable. MC got backstabbed and is now dead inside, that childhood "friend" became a prostitute that hates herself for putting her lust above her friend, and the one girl that liked him is sticking with him in a one sided love that will never be returned (even worse she's pregnant, I'm assuming with his kid).

Everything's on fire, as is the case with every other ending in this miserable genre. Who gets off on this shit?

Posted on 30 June 2021, 08:52 by: BZo1480

@tearsax Oddly enough, the chairman and Kotaro's sister actually do get some karma sent their way. There's a note on that page in the epilogue where Mako was yelling at Yoshino about claiming Kotaro before someone else could. Someone on NH used Google Glass and it says that both of them were expelled and the chairman got charged with rape. Doesn't help much with how incoherent the story is, but it's nice to know they didn't get off completely without consequences.

Posted on 08 July 2021, 14:25 by: Cargon

Jesus Christ, tag the NTR.

Posted on 27 July 2021, 03:20 by: gunsn1per

https://e-hentai.org/s/08075f1c15/1455501-230
The afterword sadly hasn't been translated yet. I really like this series and want to know more about it. It's sad that according to some people Yasu has lost interest in this series, even though originally he planned something like a short sequel or an epilogue for each character. I can understand that it might not be the most original one, as far as hentai plot goes, but the batshit characters made up for it (also the swinging and the orgy).

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Posted on 29 September 2021, 04:15 by: langlang squared

what the fuck did i just read

Posted on 05 December 2021, 19:10 by: SanyaBane

This... hit me hard tbh.
One of thousands stories which can really awake emotions. Dark ones. Usually I can not fit myself into ntr'ed hero (and I don't even try, why should I), but this time it was so clear.
This feeling, when people surrounding you know something which you don't, and DO something which you have no idea about... urgh.

Edit: Also I feel myself as total retard by reading it for free. Translator's ko-fi and patreon deleted, discrot also abandoned.
Is there any place to buy this dojinshi online maybe?

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language:	english translated
artist:	yasu
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[yasu] Ibitsu na Kankei ~Manatsu no YariCir Rankou Gasshuku~ - Distorted relationship Ch. 1 (COMIC Grape Vol. 57) [English] [DKKMD Translations]

[yasu] 歪なカンケイ ～真夏のヤリサー乱交合宿～ 第1話 (コミックグレープ Vol.57) [英訳]

[yasu] 歪なカンケイ～真夏のヤリサー乱交合宿～第1話 (コミックグレープ Vol.57) [英訳]