>Ends before anything good happens

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that page 34... lol what?

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At least it's fresh, MrCha05

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@Shinryu
Clearly he's planning another chapter.

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Chapter 2 is out, somebody go get it and dump it here.

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What a stereotypical furry self-insert. "Perfect sex master, been fucking bitches since the day I was born, everyone is sexually attracted to me, etc". Completely ruined my interest in these characters.

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Eh, lonely bitch living in a trashy trailer whos only good for one night stays and basically had no one in her life. Doesn't look much of self insert for me.

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Few things, critiques if you will:
Tags are...missing from the listing; cissy-boi, dick-girl are the main two that will help this title.
Another thing, having a dick does not make a person a "lust god." As a dude, I know. You also don't need a dick to have a powerful female character. (examples: FemShep from Mass Effect, and Wonder Woman. Why do I say this? Noticed all of Kyra's conquest were smaller weaker guys.
The only thing that seems to be in character is the cissy-boi son. He is exactly what you'd expect a guy to be like raised by a single-mother.

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She's gonna fuck her son, ain't she?

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