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With that cover I didn't have high expectations for the rest of the manga, but it's actually really well drawn. Color me surprised.

Typesetting looks great - especially considering the irregular bubbles. The chosen fonts also work well.

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It's a better ending then the anime! Good work.

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This is actually the nicest anime based work I've ever read, normally I steer clear of characters I know but you nailed their dynamic.

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THEY MAKE LOVE AT TOUKO'S HOME OHHHHHHHHHHHH

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极度优秀，66666

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