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This dialogue is atrocious. I don't think it's to do with English being your first language or not.

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"Don't worry, you will like haha"

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Felsala finally admits to having a problem

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A paetron got paid for this, lmao
Naruto fans will literally pay for nothing, no wonder Kishimoto loves them

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I love the gender bend stuff keep it coming!!

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Your original work is somewhat better.

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Wish they would stop with the interracial crap.

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@colpyro So... a slightly different skin tone equals a different race? I am like... 90% certain that Naruto doesn’t even have more than one “race” beyond “vaguely anglo-japanese anime character”.

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Some Dialogue could be a bit better so far, however it is still a WIP, however the Art is nice, also I love me some Naruko

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Good to see Felsala is continuing his tradition of being fucking terrible.
I swear he made like one good thing and went downhill quicker than a car falling off a cliff.

@WashOxide
Piss off dickhead

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@colpyro or you can just ignore it.

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good shit. glad the race baiters are here to bitch and whine about interracial when there's tons of vanilla shit stored on this site.

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genuinely i wish Felsala would get some friend to be his author.

his art is passable but his writing is... not.

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@huncho12

Personally I have no problem with Netorare in general. I personally see it as a nice spice especially when the author does something creative and makes it flow. However, as you pointed out some people are just sick of seeing Naruto Netorare where they have the Raikage continuously being the Netorare jerk.

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got to love the retards crying over stupid shit

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