Ahsoka Tano and Barriss Offee are members of the Non Sentient Lovers community, a group dedicated to the relationship with the many strange creatures of the galaxy. For them, the consideration that these creatures are “dangerous” or “don’t have a mind” is absurd. They are particularly known for their taste in self induced mutations as expression of their their inner identity.

The gallery will be fully updated progressively, during the week to come.

FULL SET ON MY WEBSITE : https://corruptedstarsystems.com/2019/05/21/non-sentient-lover/

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Full set & bonuses also available on Gumroad : www.gumroad.com/orionart
Patreon where you get to see things before the public and vote on polls : www.patreon.com/OrionArt
Twitter : www.twitter.com/OrionArt1991
Watch me work & talk with me : www.picarto.tv/OrionArtTV
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OMFG those........ faces......

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E.T. it's you？

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Boner Killer; The Gallery

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jesus fucking christ lmao

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is this finished?

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1) Those faces need work. As is they're just weird, off, and just plain creepy.
2) I wish people would state in the title that what we're about to click on is just an ad. Its really obnoxious when you don't and it doesn't make us want to go check out your stuff or give you money. It just prompts us to leave a bad review and categorize you as "that douche" when we see your stuff. Its not fair I know, but then against so is jack in the box style advertisements.
3) Is there a reason pages 2 & 3 look so radically different?

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Posted on 16 June 2019, 18:59 UTC by: wardogall PM
is this finished?

>>>>> The story is finished yes, this gallery will be fully updated in the weeks to come.

Posted on 17 June 2019, 08:44 UTC by: Rand0mPervert PM
1) Those faces need work. As is they're just weird, off, and just plain creepy.
2) I wish people would state in the title that what we're about to click on is just an ad. Its really obnoxious when you don't and it doesn't make us want to go check out your stuff or give you money. It just prompts us to leave a bad review and categorize you as "that douche" when we see your stuff. Its not fair I know, but then against so is jack in the box style advertisements.
3) Is there a reason pages 2 & 3 look so radically different?

>>>>>
1) Faces is a week spot that I am constantly working on. So yeah I'll improve :)
2) It's not just an add, the gallery is going to be fully uploaded here.
3) Page 2 is a bonus thing that I decided to add in the end. The making of this set was a bit chaotic, I started too ambitiously compared to the time I had.

Posted on 16 June 2019, 09:30 UTC by: nazaret PM
OMFG those........ faces......

>>>>> D: It gets better, I promise ! It was the first time I tried to do more stylized faces and faces are already a weakspot :/

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@OrionArt
Well, I do have to say, it's great to see that you're being so cool about criticism.
The artwork overall is genuinely good. The anatomy is spot on, shading is neat, it's all very appealing. But I do have to agree with others, the faces do not work. It's hard to say what is it specifically that makes them stand out, but I think they are too detailed. Some bits of the shading are either too strong, or entirely unnecessary, like on the lower eyelid, or in the corners of the mouth.
I'm not sure if it's something you can make late-game corrections to, but I honestly think you should try. I checked out the rest of the gallery on your website, and I can see that you've already made a significant improvement in latter pages.

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Faces are a little weird on pics 2 and 3, but they get better by 4 and the rest.
You're a pretty good artist though, so don't give up and keep working on improving. You're already miles ahead of a lot of the amateur furry art on here.

tbh, I think the low score comes more from people thinking this is just an ad, but once you start getting more art on here they'll realize this is a gallery.

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"Haaaaaaans! Get ze Flammenwerfer!"

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I love your work. And for most of your other work I'd say your faces are great. In this particular instance I think translating the cartoon version of Ahsoka with the very realistic style you use was a new endeavor for you and took some getting used to. The first face you gave us in panel 3 is too wide (even for Ahsoka's face, I checked). It's too much a cube by an inch or so, but nothing else is really wrong with it. In some of the other angles, particularly panel 8, you emphasize the wrinkles of the face too much, like the dimples and under the eyes. Realistically the eye would look that way but it's not very pleasing to look at (wrinkles rarely are, so maybe a softer shading?). By contrast panels 6 and 7 have more of a purpose for the shading under the eye, showing off its movement and rather than looking like a wrinkle it just accets the eye and face (and makes the scene hotter in my opinion). Alot of this can be applied to the body too, sometimes smoother shading looks better than sharper shading even if it would be more accurate you do a great-excellent job of this on the body normally, in all your work, and it's not something to worry about, just something to be aware of.

And to those illiterate A-holes that complain this is an ad; it is literally in the first comment that he will upload more of this to make it a full gallery. This is no different than the standard artist delay policy for free viewers. Learn to read, before posting

Last edited on 20 June 2019, 20:41.

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Posted on 20 June 2019, 18:26 UTC by: John Tank PM
@OrionArt
Well, I do have to say, it's great to see that you're being so cool about criticism.
The artwork overall is genuinely good. The anatomy is spot on, shading is neat, it's all very appealing. But I do have to agree with others, the faces do not work. It's hard to say what is it specifically that makes them stand out, but I think they are too detailed. Some bits of the shading are either too strong, or entirely unnecessary, like on the lower eyelid, or in the corners of the mouth.
I'm not sure if it's something you can make late-game corrections to, but I honestly think you should try. I checked out the rest of the gallery on your website, and I can see that you've already made a significant improvement in latter pages.

>>>>>>>> Thanks ! I like it when people express what they think about my stuff (even rough criticism weirdly enough). And yeah finding the good balance for what to accentuate and what to keep smooth is a tricky thing. In my regular kind of job I do more textured stuff, and I am exploring different things here. I don't really plan on doing correction on the art, I don't have the time, so that's what I get when I do mistakes.
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Posted on 20 June 2019, 18:29 UTC by: kappitoo PM
Faces are a little weird on pics 2 and 3, but they get better by 4 and the rest.
You're a pretty good artist though, so don't give up and keep working on improving. You're already miles ahead of a lot of the amateur furry art on here.
tbh, I think the low score comes more from people thinking this is just an ad, but once you start getting more art on here they'll realize this is a gallery.

>>>>>>>>>>> That's right, I should have been more clear at first. I did the gallery when I was a bit tired and didn't put clrearly that I planned on updatng the gallery. Which could explain the backlash.
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Posted on 20 June 2019, 20:00 UTC by: bgrim PM
I love your work. And for most of your other work I'd say your faces are great. In this particular instance I think translating the cartoon version of Ahsoka with the very realistic style you use was a new endeavor for you and took some getting used to. The first face you gave us in panel 3 is too wide (even for Ahsoka's face, I checked). It's too much a cube by an inch or so, but nothing else is really wrong with it. In some of the other angles, particularly panel 8, you emphasize the wrinkles of the face too much, like the dimples and under the eyes. Realistically the eye would look that way but it's not very pleasing to look at (wrinkles rarely are, so maybe a softer shading?). By contrast panels 6 and 7 have more of a purpose for the shading under the eye, showing off its movement and rather than looking like a wrinkle it just accets the eye and face (and makes the scene hotter in my opinion). Alot of this can be applied to the body too, sometimes smoother shading looks better than sharper shading even if it would be more accurate you do a great-excellent job of this on the body normally, in all your work, and it's not something to worry about, just something to be aware of.

And to those illiterate A-holes that complain this is an ad; it is literally in the first comment that he will upload more of this to make it a full gallery. This is no different than the standard artist delay policy for free viewers. Learn to read, before posting

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Wow, thanks for such a insightful analysis :D. For the negative response about the "ad thing". I take the blame, I was a bit tired when I made the gallery and forgot to specify that I was going to update the gallery fully here with time. So I don't blame people for seeing an Ad. I want to motivate people to go on gumroad/patreon, while still offering good free stuff (the best I can do at least), there is a balance to find between marketing and content and here I learned that the least I can do is to be clear.

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OMG that last panel <3

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This is not science

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so are they sentient or not?

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Honestly, this entire comic pretty much played on my fetishes. Matter of fact, it's much easier to list off the things I wasn't really into, which is the enlarged clitoris part. Never really was into that.
Everything else though? Mm. <3

I'm not really sure what people are complaining about when they talk about the faces. If they were referring to the second pic, then not only can I understand, but I have to congratulate you on your huge leap in progress!

My only complaints really are:
- The enlarged clitoris.
- How short it was (especially the sex scene. Could've added multiple tbh.)
- Her transformation, particularly her head tails. I mean, I'm kinda conflicted about it, although I guess its because Ahsoka's unique appearance with her head tails is what made me fall in love with her in the first place.

Then again, this comic is so one of a kind and the art is good enough where I can actually ignore the "flaws" to do what Zone-tan likes watching us do.

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