On a new name, on a new system because my regular PC is out of order for a bit.

But I promised this, so I delivered.
This is not the best laptop for editing or doing much on, but I didn't want to break a promise.

Despite the rough edges, I do hope you'll enjoy reading this!

Loved it! Thanks for your efforts!

Base +15, Lostalgia +9, Ice_Cream +12

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1403899/442754ba0e/

Nice work, dude! Excellent translation, and the editing looks nice. Thanks for sharing this!

Base +38, Lostalgia +9

I like Oono, but a Hidaka ending would've been fine with me as well. She deserves something for all the work she put into getting Haruo to pay attention to her.

I wish the author had put more gaming terms in the dialogue (like "I've leveled up in my knowledge of how to have sex!" or "Take this combo attack!"). It would've been typical of a die-hard gamer like Haruo to say such things.

Thanks for the translation!

Base +32, Lostalgia +9, spierdalacz -8, ZeroRazor -6, IncognitoMaud +6, Mistylin +1

Yeah, translations are indeed a bit rough; I'm still grateful though, just for the fact that some people still took heart into translating HSG doujinshi.

Base +6

Art 6. Plot 4. Sexiness 5. Translation 5. True to character 5. All out of 10.

Base +8