Sorry, pages were really out of order (I blame my raws). Fixed it and a couple other things.

Its just me or some pages seem out of order?

Base +6, devianthandholder +4, Silicon9856 +6, jfragrettel +8, Forgunia +5

That's just how they were in the raws, it has a weird double plot going on, I've double and triple checked it.

Edit: Didn't quadruple check. Fixed order.

Last edited on 04 August 2019, 12:04.

Base +1, Maxwelzal +4, Franco0585 +12, takeiteasy93 +6, somercet +8, Heulend +6, jfragrettel +8, SocksGalore +6, Hymenripper +6, Silicon9856 +6

Ok, this was a good read but yeah, this is clearly out of order...either that or the artist was trying a really nutzy and messy storytelling structure...you can tell how the story is supposed to be following some dialogue:
- they start complaining about the place, start some memories
- first orgasm of the day cutting to "ever since that day"
- flashback to sleepover and becoming buddies
- back to the present where one becomes curious about the other's pussy
- conflict of feelings and "let's get even"
- final orgasm and kiss to holding hands and end.
Remember that "cover" or rather tittle page doesn't necessarily mark the very beggining so it can be on third or so i think .... still, pretty sweet thanks for sharing :3

Base +7, devianthandholder +4, Silicon9856 +6, jfragrettel +8

Omg yes, nice to see Sudoo Kaoru getting some love. One of the few yuri artists where sex is the main point, and the girls don't need reasons to be slutty lesbians.

The order is most likely wrong though. Looks like you missed the older raw that has a different order: https://e-hentai.org/g/749651/2b1bfa07e7/

Base +9, Silicon9856 +6, caedweld +6, CxHxA +6, somercet +8, jfragrettel +8, MrDanger +6, Romi the Byzantine +7, MitchTheGreat +7, Swimmingly +6

Correct order as of posting: 1, 2, 3, 4, 11, 12, 9, 10, 7, 8, 5, 6, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24
(edit: now fixed)

Last edited on 04 August 2019, 13:08.

Base +6, caedweld +6, somercet +8, jfragrettel +8, Silicon9856 +6

Fine I'll believe it's wrong, I'll reorder it.

Edit: Now reordered.

Base +1, jfragrettel +8

Reading it a second time, the typesetting is damn nice, not mentionning for a first attempt.

TL looks fine, except maybe p.10. "なんだから" means she's insisting on what she just said, like "I'm telling you... not to... lick there....", or "Don't... lick [me] there... listen to me / please..."

Base +9

Thank you. I'm always bothered when I read manga with poor typesetting so I decided to try my best when I'm the one doing it. Regarding translation, I guess that does fit a little better but as mentioned I'm a beginner in the language :)

Base +1