This is a fan made remake of [Susuki-san] Onahole Guy 1+2 comics so the art is all by Susuki-san not me but the new story line is just a dabbing of my mind into the mix.

I got to say I like the original comics enough to make this alternate story line using pieces and parts of both original works. That being said I don't think anyone can beat the original work.
Note; I have most of the things I've messed around with here: https://www.imagefap.com/profile/King_of_zzz?delshout=246512

How can you remake perfection.

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theprinceh you do have a point there.

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Could you rewrite it again? And then re-proofread it?

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Why mess with a masterpiece?

Last edited on 19 May 2019, 09:09.

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This is stretchin' english to the edge of intelligibility, worse than Google Translate!. Just a sample :

End of Pg. 2 [QUOTE]
... so sweet know that your a really a human that their unawarely ramming their fuck polls down into him ...
[/QUOTE]

What ?? Ramming their FUCK POLLS in him ??? Is it a new campaign strategy for Election's Day ?

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Please keep doing it, who cares that this is not official...

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