Here's my take on fixing Chochi's Lovely Pets: chapter 1. If there's anything I missed, and need to be re-work on, let me know. I've taken the liberty to clean out most of the dust off from the comic.
All credit goes to Chochi for creating Lovely Pets.
I remember seeing this comic advertising some Totally Legit!™ porn site back when i was 11 or so, along with some of Jay Naylor's art. Thanks for this.