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Himawari Warrior WAS out on a mission. to hunt for large snakes. The battle began, but [it didn't turn out as she expected?]. Before she HAD A chance to attack, the snake made its move and coiled its tail around the rookie fighter with lightning speed, capturing her.

She tried to free her arms, gritting her teeth. She wiggled her chest back and forth to slide her arms through the top coil. If she could free her arms, she could fight back.

She twisted and turned her body to break free. But there was little she could do against such powerful coils.

Himawari: "... The coils are just too tight!"

It seemed impossible for her to escape the coils of the snake on her own.

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The fight lasted for many minutes, Himawari struggled with her diminishing strength.

She said as she continued to struggle, the coils restraining her fully. The snake started to constrict her... slowly but surely... every time she exhaled, the coils increased in pressure...

Himawari: "It's getting tighter and tighter..."

The only thing she could do was squirming around uselessly. The monster tightened its coils around her body, ..., to the point where she could barely breathe anymore.

... but the monster still continued to squeeze Himawari tighter.

If it kept going like this, Himawari would be strangled to death.

When she was no longer able to put up any struggle, the monster opened its jaws widely.

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Usually, a snake would suffocate its prey until they were unconscious or dead.

The snake unhinged its jaw, preparing to swallow its prey whole.

She tried to struggle to escape from this dangerous situation, but her arms were still pinned to her sides by the coils. The snake slowly swallowed her body further and further. Soon, her entire upper body was inside the snake's maw.

... from both sides while she slowly moved through the snake's throat.

No matter how hard she struggled, it would be for naught. The snake soon had its prey swallowed whole.

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Inside the snake's mouth, Himawari struggled to break free from this place.

The girl tried to wriggle her way out and avoid becoming food, but escape was almost impossible by the time her torso was swallowed. Afterwards Himawari was pushed down its tight throat all the way.

The strong esophagus muscles sent the prey sliding towards the stomach with ease.

Himawari: "Don't push me in any further..."

Still, in the end, she was no match for the power of the strong muscle. The fleshy walls tightened around her until she could no longer move.

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Thick walls of muscle closed in around Himawari, fitting to her whole body...

Himawari mustered the last of her strength for one final struggle. She frantically thrashed around and squirmed, trying to force her way out of this situation. ... It was already too later for her.

The walls of muscle were far thicker than those of regular snakes and also much stronger. ... there wasn't much she could do.

No matter how much she tried to call for help, there was no way anyone would randomly come here, into the depth of the forest.Himawari was completely on her own.

Notes:
That's pretty much all the errors I found. Stick to one tense, don't use present and past interchangeably. Unless you wanted to change from past to presence at some point. Still, only stick to one tense at a time. She and her are not interchangeable either. Get a beta reader. If anything about the corrections isn't clear, feel free to ask. The format on this site isn't exactly ideal for things like this.

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Question: Am I a sick person if I fapped to this? Not to mention a horrible person because Himawari is mai waifu?

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@TheMoondoggie You're fine

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It's the artists translation, not the uploaders dummy @danielwain

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