List of major liberties taken for those who want to bitch about the translation instead of jack off:

p11 "deep chinpo plunge": This is actually literal, just made the wording more cringy to make it sound more like a special move

p13 Gilligan part: sentence structure was moved around

p15 womb kisses: originally just pushes/pressure

p15 cute denial: added in to emphasize what Artoria was saying

p15 pussy's new master: originally just master, added extra words to not confuse with original master

p16 first sentence: yeah didn't really know how to phrase this. meaning is 80% the same

p19 chamberpot: originally armpit-visible mouth toilet; no way in hell that's gonna fit in the speech bubble

p21 last sentence: originally what a good ejaculation; sounded out of place and awk

p22: helper, supporter, role, hard point at work, all not 100% sure about

p23: give your master my regards: originally smth like do your best with your master, not sure

p25: Artoria is still sounding arrogant/proud here; words didn't fit actions so I changed it

p26: added forever, sex with you is the best: originally just had her repeating ill be your sex friend

p27: orginally: the feeling I couldn't get with master is here, and time to sign the contract, take this!

p28: second to last sentence I'm only 60% sure about

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I'll leave the above as a reminder to laugh at myself. Looking back at this years later, it is quite shit.

Nice NTR twist from the first one. Much better when its not all that obvious. Appreciate all the hard translation work =03!

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What’s with the string of Artoria NTR?
I’m very grateful, but I’m also very confused.

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Awesome to see a translation for this great doujin.

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I want Guda to have revenge by seducing every other Artoria available by doing the good old "sensitivity times 3000" command spell, having a huge orgy with them right in front of this Artoria, and proclaiming her inferior in the end.
Going from vanilla to NTR to reverse NTR is not something I ever saw before, but I want to see it.

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Thanks but I might wait for a higher quality version, image-, typesetting-, and translation-wise.

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Thank you for the translation.

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@DinoCock She´s vanilla as hell so of course she´s gonna be target to NTR

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@thondam it was telegraphed obvious from the first one though

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@DinoCock

Thanks to cucks like @thondam, @Lanc3r and ofc you

Ah the original cuck @Kevin9noob has come

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>Arutoria

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No romance in fate series.

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Faceless being is here to steal your girl.

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Here's the Vanilla prequel, but we all know this NTR one is the superior version.

https://e-hentai.org/g/1346911/a2f7a726ff/

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chinpo plunge!

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The cuckest part is how this is not even a proper translation since even the translator admit at the end he doesn't know japanese and made up most dialogues to "make it hotter"

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Wait this guy had an erection for more than three hours? He's in danger!

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The text may be invented but hey atleast i get the context of why or how Artoria was doing NTR in this doujin lol

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Ha! You thought I was a wholesome doujinshi because of the first part?! But it was actually me! Kono Netorare da!

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We Need This in Sub Spanish people. Thanks.

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need this in original reso as well

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Alter version, what if, another timeline, my ass. This is legit sequel isn't it ? For those of you who don't know, artist claimed that this is what so called "possibility" if this turn out to be NTR.

But that is bullshit self-defense claim no matter how you look this is definitely a sequel.

Last edited on 21 September 2019, 08:14.

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Please tell me he's gonna continue this series!!

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ah NTR, how fucking disappointing.

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I knew the mangaka couldn't resist making NTR story

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Vanilla or NTR, I'll take any Artoria.

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Arutoria ??? Dafuq ???

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Well, that would explain why the previous volume didn't have much x-rays aside from this one.

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thank you for the meal, now i wonder where's gudako...

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Lmao at that bet. She literally gets nothing if she wins and he gets to fuck her twice twelve times. Dude didn't even bother with the obligatory "blackmail boyfriend with proof of him raping his girlfriend."

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NTR logic is retarded by default but boy howdy that bet is some smooth brain shit.

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