AWWW, SHIT HERE WE GO AGAIN!

Pls support the artist, maybe some day he will realese a digital version and i can do a proper color, and not this shit, so buy his work.

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So I did the "translation" and "typesetting", even though I just copied and rewrote the previous translation, snice I don't have any fucking idea of japanese.

Textless v:https://e-hentai.org/g/1503794/2cd8e87c51/

PD: I don´t know what is written in the page 12 in the second bubble, so if someone know pls let me know.

09 that's the most retarded bet i've ever seen

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For page 12's second bubble, "From now on, this almost unused pussy will take the shape and size of my dick" should have been split between current bubble and the empty one

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page 12's 2nd bubble should be "for now on, this almost unused pussy"

just like @none123 said

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extra juicyy with coloring :))

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Just remember, darker skinned men have a higher probability of stealing your girl sooo...do with that information what you will. Bye! 👋

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Incredible coloring job, but there are so many typos.

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image 15 should say "innocent woman".

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@ganondorf20 because it's bad translated

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@sshions No. I read Japanese version it's definitely a retarded bet. It's like "if your boyfriend wants to have a sex with you, then have sex with me for 12 condoms".
Oh well NTR logic.

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The translation is rough, and when Artoria, revealing this is a cheating sequel rather than a happy one, asks "How did it come to this?" I find myself asking the same question. It's pretty goddamn contrived, and maybe it's the rough translation, but it never really gets a satisfactory answer.

The actual sex stuff is well-drawn on a technical level, despite my distaste for the subject matter, but I can get that anywhere, and the awful and contrived circumstances of the story really drag it down.

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I don't give a shit about the story or anything, Artoria being fucked silly is always hot.

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NTR is for retards anyway, so it fits

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Oh NTR. I can always count on you to have the dumbest plus and most retarded character choices in basically anything ever. That bet is just insane. She gets LITERALLY nothing out of having sex with him twelve times (and the time the makes the bet, she has no way of knowing he has a foot long dick that can somehow sustain an erection for 3 straight hours).

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The one you copied is effectively a rewrite, as it should be tagged, because the "TL" even admitted to making shit up just because they personally thought it was hotter, so I think that should apply to this gallery as well.

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