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If it's complete, it ended too soon.

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This is... awful. Why would anyone like this? She hates the sex, the guy is clearly meant to be a creep, and Mary Jane could do WAY better if she was trying to break off from Peter.

The art is passable, at best. I wouldn't have even made the association without the constant name drops. The monologues feel completely out of character, for any version of Mary Jane I've ever come across. It really feels like the only reason she's even the protagonist is for fan service, but I have no idea what kind of fan would want to read this. Seriously, who wants to see a woman go through this kind of thing? She gets cheated on, then goes and fucks some random dick to get a role in a B-grade horror flick. She doesn't even like the sex, and everything about this makes you want to hate the guy fucking her. What is this accomplishing? Peter doesn't know, so it's not revenge. If he did, he's apparently fucking someone who won't break when he puts it in, so he shouldn't care. Seriously, it's such a waste of the characters.

@Lanko; you're right, it did end too soon. The author still needed to show me something that made it worth it to read his crap novel.

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Man, the comic version of Harvey Weinstein looks weird af,

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@samtron10000

Weinstein? Hell, I'm thinking Saul Goodman got a new identity.

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