Yeah this is definitely not for everyone and I suck at redrawing. Bite me. And support the artist.

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Translation difficulties that I bothered to take note of:
p15 top right 蕩け切った - melt/be charmed, followed by kanji for cut; maybe rapidly melting? but then that sounds weird. I have no idea

p17 bottom left panel - In that case, you recognize me as your master/owner and I should meet your expectations as such? That's the general gist of it, but I figured it'd be fine to squeeze that down to something less detailed

Summary of author's notes(second to last page): Apologizes for scheduling issues, talks about wanting to draw Gudako and/or Jeanne's(not Mash, who is also in this story) training stories as well

Raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1261154/f79a49d572/

So you can check which parts were redrawn. Basically, you gave her a nice wax job, removing all those nasty pubes/hairs? You can see the traces of the redraw, yes. Anyway, thanks for your hard work - It can always help others who want to make a better version.

Last edited on 01 November 2019, 07:39.

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Fucking disgusting. If you're going to butcher it at least have the decency to make a normal version as well.

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I appreciate your effort for translating and editing, but can you please provide the version without the redraw? Thank you.

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p24 : "Mash is getting gangbanged". Ah dammit, we won't see any of it T_T

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Thanks for the translations but it would be nice to have the not redrawn version.

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Post the pubes version.

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It's not only redrawn. It looks like you used the resample version of the gallery instead of the full resolution original. Every page here is downsized to 1280x1800 resolution from 2200x3000, making each page almost half the size they used to be. There's no good reason to degrade quality like this. You should always use the same resolution as the RAW. Thanks for the translation though.

Here's how you can download the original full resolution images and avoid this mistake in your future projects:

Click on "Archive Download" and then "Download Original Archive".
If you prefer to download one page at a time, make sure you download using the "Download Original Source" link below each opened image in gallery.
If you download via torrent then choose the bigger torrent. Don't download the torrent with 1280x in its name.

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Removing the pubes... what a fucking heretic.

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