MY FIRST TIME TRANSLATING AND EDITING
BOY IT'S HARD TO STAY TRUE TO THE ACTUAL SCRIPT
THANK YOU Pavane FOR THE SCAN and BigBoobsPerv

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1301060/f75eea8842/
Chinese: https://e-hentai.org/g/1308450/3c601d78e9/
Korean: https://e-hentai.org/g/1302952/68a3f070d0/

The translation is actually quite good, reads very well. Small tip for the uploader comment: all caps is sometimes perceived as shouting. But really I do hope you continue with translating and editing, it's pretty good!

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@ DJNoni Duly noted about all caps and thank you for the feedback.

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unga bunga

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So the guy actually waited several months before making the move? By porn standard he is almost at the level of a saint.

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Not really, Moestar, he's been working her since day 1, starting with the grass bra.

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So it's more like he played the long con

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Ahh, you can always trust Amazon to deliver good ol’ senseless fuckin’.

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Hilarious and Hot as usual from Amazon <3

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Imagine the hilarity if they found out the barrier trapping them in there was gone a long time ago.

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What's been updated? From a glance, I see some translations on pages 3,4,8,9,12 have been fixed up. Am I missing anything else?

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Great work!!

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@ timbus Nope.

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Having a whole island to himself with a chick that's got huge milkjugs. I'm jealous

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holy shit I wish I could do something like P09 (_008)

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