This is my first time scanlating anything, so there will definitely be mistakes.

Raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1519326/4448db9f8c/

Not bad at all for a first time! I would have liked to see the post-script translated as well. There is not much dialogue going on, so your translation works quite well for this doujin. Thanks for this upload!

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Artist is also the illustrator for 'Isekai Maou to Shoukan Shoujo Dorei Majutsu' novels.
Hence Shera on page 16 and why this "original" character looks identical to Rafleisha (Only difference is eye color).
Illustration from volume 9 for comparison: https://isekaicyborg.files.wordpress.com/2018/04/02.jpg

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Also images are not in original resolution, editing with phone is a sin.
I have no idea why this gallery have high rating tho.

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>"it's nice to be squeezed gently while cumming"
>looks like his sack is about to be ripped in half on pg. 10
Other than that not bad, a little sloppy on the grammar here and there but definitely not the worst.
Thanks!

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could you increase the line spacing a little next time? lines of text are almost squished on top of each other

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man, this artstyle remind me so much of Ishikei...
that was the good time

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I'm so glad he draws hentai too

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