I didn't see an English translation of this gem, so I figured that I could just get Google translate to get a half-way descent English version of this beauty. If anyone sees any translation mistakes from the original, leave a comment and I'll fix it as soon as I can.

google translate with that font ganmarei deserves better..

Base +6, HitMeHarderDaddy +6, Debonair +6, Hexablue +6, FrankWeast +5, NerdNumber9 +12, conficker +7, meh meh +7, bigscuba +4, Onsi +7, fortis228 +7, Ahegaosensei +5, hibikiyamada +7, and 70 more...

Learn English. Then learn Japanese. Then get an editor. Only then try translating.
Then get a typesetter or learn typesetting.

Base +10, Debonair +6, justlookingforporn +6, HitMeHarderDaddy +6, Hexablue +6, conficker +7, meh meh +7, bigscuba +4, Pr1de +15, fortis228 +7, chexusai +6, u2526204 +5, SCSS +19, and 96 more...

This is a mess on every level.

Base +6, HitMeHarderDaddy +6, meh meh +7, bigscuba +4, SCSS +19, kanhsir +6, Vile Mk 2 +10, CrimsonVI +6, Krazylec +6, Gogetters +8, Danjian +6, onlyregistere -13, The_Agent +6, and 6 more...

Would've been better if you used Jokerman font.

Base +6, HitMeHarderDaddy +6, CrimsonVI +6, onlyregistere -13, Ohdear +21, Hetzel +4, TissuePlease +8

Oh dear... This is certainly a translation. You might want to run this one by an automatic grammar checker, because you are making beginner level mistakes in the English.

Base +6, HitMeHarderDaddy +6, kanhsir +6, CrimsonVI +6, JukanX +24, bigscuba +4, Krazylec +6, onlyregistere +13, BobDringus +6, Dogly God +6, Hetzel +4, daicalun07 +6, TissuePlease +8, and 2 more...

Squid Horror? No.

Translation Horror.

Base +6, Gogetters +8, Kuro Tamashi +8, onlyregistere -13, zangetsu96 +7, Ohdear +21, Dredenot +6, malhavoc431 +11, BlueThree +8, -Shun- +23, The_Agent +6, Dersaxx +8, Orengestar +7, and 14 more...

Visually I liked it. Translation is a bit rough though, but at least it gives a ball park idea of what is being said. Still better than a rewrite.

Base +3, Gogetters -8, baadar +7, onlyregistere +13, neochef0 -10

Can you fucking not butcher manga with your bullshit "translation"?

Base +6, Gogetters +8, Kuro Tamashi +8, rodiqio -7, Xalren525 +6, onlyregistere -13, neochef0 +10, saastokoko +6, Orengestar +7, Torosaku +6, meh meh +7, firedragon89 +14, swaglord42069 +5, and 4 more...

Sexy story, horrible typesetting and spelling.

Base +23, BobDringus +6, Hetzel +4, Gentleman Chimera +8, netherworm +6

I'll just go with the raw for now...

Base +6

was this machine translated?
because none of these translations could have been done by a human...

Base +7, Orengestar +7, StormofGreed +6, firedragon89 +14

Wait, did she really eat him in the end or not?

Base +6

Do you mind if I have a go at releasing a more polished version of this?

Base +6, zethrindor +7

Rough grammar
p2: quite -> quiet
p3: carful -> careful
p3: ment -> meant
p3: gerenty -> guarantee
p6: feeling -> feel
p8: to be blamed for -> for taking
p9: orgasim -> orgasm
p10: the visual is dirty -> It looks dirty/gross
p14: differnt -> different
p14: your -> you're

Base +42, Glovelove. +19, warellis +7, netherworm +6, cutegyaru +17