Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/78219914

Is it me or is this half complete? I mean, it looks like a draft after a few pages.

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Dude definitely ran out of time. But hey, the ending looks like a setup so maybe he'll have a fully black and white version later. The lines are all there so it's not an impossible feat.

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Damn I love maids.

Last edited on 11 December 2019, 11:11.

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> All of the pages starting from when the art changes are a dream sequence.

You'd have a point IF the "dream sequence" was from a single point of view, whether the boy's or the maid's. However, the perspective changes throughout the rest of the manga between the boy and the maid. That negates a dream sequence.

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Did we just stop trying at page 7 or what?

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Reaching page 7 is like going from a 3D world to a 2D world, it's unsettling.

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I agree. dream sequence.

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