One of the two versions.

Everything was redrawn, edited and translated by me.

I took a few liberties, and had to improv on some things that I couldn't quite understand. I'm sorry that my Japanese isn't quite up to par with what should be standard for translations, but I really wanted to get this one out there.

The holidays are coming up, and figured this was a perfect way to march towards that. I will continue to improve in 2020.

Happy reading!

Edit: Fixed a few panels.

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I like Nessa a lot but I wish they had showed more of Melony before the game launched as well.

ALT TL: https://e-hentai.org/g/1531165/e81f756571/
Non-pantyhose version: https://e-hentai.org/g/1531221/bf0d926139/

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The second Melony dojin and it's incest? Merry fucking Christmas to me.

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Definitely some QUALITY stuff here!
What I would pay to be Gordie and plowing such a wonderful MILF...
Melony is DEFINITELY the best girl to come from Gen 8 and may even be better than any Gen 7 girl as well!
SO much to love about her!
I cannot WAIT to see what voice they give her in the anime.
What a quality doujin and translation!
BLESS you for this, PhantomsJoker and PerceptivePercival!
BLESS you both!
I look forward to seeing what Pokemon SwSh doujins come out in less than a month at C97!

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that's so weird, he's got the face of a shota/young-man, but the body of hairless fat-oldman
it's so distracting

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