Thanks to imljc for original raws https://e-hentai.org/g/1468677/81419fb29c/

This artist has several other pieces to this series and is coming out with a complete collection book at C97. None of the other works are uploaded but if someone does either I will translate or commission someone else to do it(more likely) .

So 2nd self translated work I'm putting out. Learned a lot after first one and steep learning curve getting into gimp.
Full transparency I used an online translator and then double checked with what Japanese I know and made sure it was proper English. Not perfect but as accurate as I can be. General reception seemed positive last time and I think it's better to have something translated than not at all so I decided to do this one. Went a bit overboard and did a bit of redrawing and all the sound effects.. which I will likely not do again. Adds a lot of work and after this I feel like English onomatopoeia really sucks compared to Japanese.

Debating posting textless version for translators too so leave a comment if anyone would like me to.

Thanks, overall looks good. Your writing is less stilted sounding than mine seems up to end up on for translations.

Some nits on the translation:
Page 3: Not sure if intentionally translated this way or not, but in the final panel, it's "Can you lick it?" (or maybe "suck it" reads better) not "Can we continue?"
Page 6: Panel 1: Pretty sure even with the question mark the ぞ makes it more of a command, not asking permission. "Then...I'm going to stick it in now?"
Panel 1-2: Missing the "all at once" or "right away" sense of the いっきに. Maybe something like "Sensei's penis...push it all the way in at once"
Page 7: Panel 1: Possibly intentionally elided for space, but "I'm going to cum again" -> "Even though it's my second time, I'm already..."
General note: for 興奮 (koufun) I wouldn't say that what you have is wrong, but consider something more like "horny" or "aroused" than "excited"?

Page 2 you skipped the character intros in the top right which are just:
Characters
Izuna
A fox eared girl.
Sensei
A male illustrator.

Hope that was helpful without second guessing your editing choices too much. Feel free to hit me up via PM if you want translation help or checking on the full work.

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